So Sacrifice Yourself, and Let Me Have What's Left - Comments

  • Odd!Aud!

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    Yeah, Ace making friends is good. =}
    Johnny is so nice to Ace, it makes me happy. And I wonder what his vision was. =}
    He probably saw, like, Zacky and Candace making out or something. *shakes head*
    Loved it!
    November 7th, 2009 at 03:00am
  • Hollywood I Am

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    This story is so amazing!
    I must say you are doing a wonderful job with it.
    I love the way you put Johnny in this.

    I can't wait for another update :)
    November 6th, 2009 at 08:23pm
  • sweeterthansweettea

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    I love this story! It's so good! You should have Zacky walk in on her cutting or something have a super dramatic scene like that! Haha good job. It's my favorite story.
    November 6th, 2009 at 04:27pm
  • IvySaint

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    really good!can't wait for more!
    November 6th, 2009 at 03:12pm
  • Odd!Aud!

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    Yay! It's speeding up!
    Hm, living with Brian? Not a bad deal.
    But man, I'd start freaking out if I learned all the stuff she just did. I'd be like, "Um...can I hand this stuff off to an intern or something?"
    And your costume sounds fabulous. My friends and I went as Avenged Sevenfold...haha.
    Brilliant! Can't wait for more!
    October 31st, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • xhiimalex

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    I guess I didn't realize you were writing this story, cause I just found and read all of it last night/this morning. I have to say it's fantastic so far, written well, and I love the character's personalities. I'm glad you picked Zacky as one of the main characters cause he really fits the role well. It's just as hard for me as it is for Candace to believe she's the Forbidden One, because she doesn't seem violent. I have a feeling it's going to change real quick. Excited for the next chapter. =]
    October 30th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • victim.

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    Love it so far, can't wait fo the next update (:
    October 30th, 2009 at 05:13pm
  • IvySaint

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    good update!can't wait for more.
    October 30th, 2009 at 03:52pm
  • Ace.Spade

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    okay it's official. i'm in love. witha story no less. it is amazing and im addicted lol
    you need to update very very very soon!
    October 26th, 2009 at 07:26pm
  • bamftastic;

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    I LOVE Underworld.
    And I LOVE Lycan's.
    Ah, I'm so happy :]
    October 25th, 2009 at 11:53pm
  • bamftastic;

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    Oh shit, I forgot, there are more than 7 chapters. xDDD
    I'll read the rest now :]
    October 25th, 2009 at 09:25pm
  • bamftastic;

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    So, pretty sure Johnny's more a mind reader than just very observant. xD
    I feel really bad for Zack, since well, I knew exactly how his character feels.
    Update soon?
    October 25th, 2009 at 09:24pm
  • londoncalling

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    omfgg brilliant ! spectacular. i get so mad tht u dont update in like a week, but when you do GOODNESS THE WAIT WAS WORTH IT .<3 i really hope u write books some day.
    October 25th, 2009 at 01:45am
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    There isn't one thing I don't like about this story. Keep up the amazing work!
    October 24th, 2009 at 02:28am
  • Odd!Aud!

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    Yay, it's picking up a bit more now!
    Hm, Candace is The Forbidden One? The most dangerous hybrid ever?
    Huh. Interesting. I can't wait until she gets all her answers...because then I get all my answers too! haha.
    Brilliant! Can't wait for more!
    October 23rd, 2009 at 04:57pm
  • NikkiEst.6661

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    Forbidden one?! :O
    It's getting even more interesting!
    Great update, loved the first half ;)
    October 23rd, 2009 at 04:43pm
  • victim.

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    Nice update. Can't wait for the next chapter (:
    October 17th, 2009 at 12:03am
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    I love how you have written this. It's like reading a novel, and anybody that can write fanfiction in that form, deserves a high five or something. I cannot wait to read more.
    October 16th, 2009 at 07:51pm
  • Poison_Ivy

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    I stilll love this story. And I don'tk now Breaking Benjamin, I thought you just made the title, up, 'cause it was cool sounding. Who ever called you a dumbass, is one.
    October 16th, 2009 at 01:55am
  • Odd!Aud!

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    Aww, Zacky and Candace are so cute together.
    Gena's a sweetheart, but she can just leave Zacky alone so Zacky and Candace can be together. =D
    I'm sorry that you're in a sucky mood.
    That person really should've just let it go, about the Piece Of Mind thing. What a stupid little insignificant detail to call you a dumbass over. They were probably just jealous that they can't write such awesome amazing super duper epic stories like you can.
    I hope loads of people comment so it crosses out your sucky mood! =}
    Brilliant! I absolutely loved this chapter, and I wonder what's gonna happen between Zacky, Candace, and Gena.
    October 16th, 2009 at 01:55am