Yeah, Ace making friends is good. =} Johnny is so nice to Ace, it makes me happy. And I wonder what his vision was. =} He probably saw, like, Zacky and Candace making out or something. *shakes head* Loved it!
I love this story! It's so good! You should have Zacky walk in on her cutting or something have a super dramatic scene like that! Haha good job. It's my favorite story.
Yay! It's speeding up! Hm, living with Brian? Not a bad deal. But man, I'd start freaking out if I learned all the stuff she just did. I'd be like, "Um...can I hand this stuff off to an intern or something?" And your costume sounds fabulous. My friends and I went as Avenged Sevenfold...haha. Brilliant! Can't wait for more!
I guess I didn't realize you were writing this story, cause I just found and read all of it last night/this morning. I have to say it's fantastic so far, written well, and I love the character's personalities. I'm glad you picked Zacky as one of the main characters cause he really fits the role well. It's just as hard for me as it is for Candace to believe she's the Forbidden One, because she doesn't seem violent. I have a feeling it's going to change real quick. Excited for the next chapter. =]
So, pretty sure Johnny's more a mind reader than just very observant. xD I feel really bad for Zack, since well, I knew exactly how his character feels. Update soon?
omfgg brilliant ! spectacular. i get so mad tht u dont update in like a week, but when you do GOODNESS THE WAIT WAS WORTH IT .<3 i really hope u write books some day.
Yay, it's picking up a bit more now! Hm, Candace is The Forbidden One? The most dangerous hybrid ever? Huh. Interesting. I can't wait until she gets all her answers...because then I get all my answers too! haha. Brilliant! Can't wait for more!
I love how you have written this. It's like reading a novel, and anybody that can write fanfiction in that form, deserves a high five or something. I cannot wait to read more.
I stilll love this story. And I don'tk now Breaking Benjamin, I thought you just made the title, up, 'cause it was cool sounding. Who ever called you a dumbass, is one.
Aww, Zacky and Candace are so cute together. Gena's a sweetheart, but she can just leave Zacky alone so Zacky and Candace can be together. =D I'm sorry that you're in a sucky mood. That person really should've just let it go, about the Piece Of Mind thing. What a stupid little insignificant detail to call you a dumbass over. They were probably just jealous that they can't write such awesome amazing super duper epic stories like you can. I hope loads of people comment so it crosses out your sucky mood! =} Brilliant! I absolutely loved this chapter, and I wonder what's gonna happen between Zacky, Candace, and Gena.
Johnny is so nice to Ace, it makes me happy. And I wonder what his vision was. =}
He probably saw, like, Zacky and Candace making out or something. *shakes head*
Loved it!