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  • Alice Verney

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    damn this is kinky
    May 18th, 2008 at 12:33am
  • The Rumor

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    This story really emits emotion.
    I love it so much.
    May 18th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • Mrs.Brightside

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    omg haha XD

    I was about to ask if that wasnt gerard on the other line but then I re read it and saw that you had written that it was Gerard XD...Has he realised its actually Frank and toying with him or he actually just wanted to have phone sex with a stranger? lol cool update ;D
    May 18th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • cuntmuffin

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    is the story over? not that I want it to be, it just sound so final.
    March 9th, 2008 at 04:06am
  • thunder.

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    Wow.
    I'm a new reader, and gosh, your writing is beyond amazing. It's like... gah.
    Wow. You've left me speechless. I love stories that leave me all '...'
    I love it.
    I love how you've portrayed Frank. There's something about his character that's just amazing. Yet, you kind of hate him at the same time. He's got a weird aura, should I say.
    And Gerard. I don't want to talk about him, lol.
    But you've got an amazing story here. I love what you're doing with it.
    Can't wait to see more, especially since that last chapter. I wonder what will change.
    March 8th, 2008 at 07:26pm
  • KATAL

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    Here is the long over-due comment.

    The story isn't cliche, even though there are so many stories about Frank being a stripper or prostitute. It's not cliche because he's a stripper and a prostitute. Plus he has a suicide hot line. I love the parts when he talks to the people, because it's the main way you describe how he's feeling at that moment, and it helps show what his character is like.

    I think this may have been one of the first few stories I've ever read on Mibba, and this resulted in me making an account, so thank you.
    March 1st, 2008 at 07:32pm
  • EeVie !

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    that was amazing
    seriously, i feel like i have no words left at all.....
    i mean....that was soooo good!
    that was some of the best writing i've ever read and it story itself was mindblowing!

    just....
    wow.....
    March 1st, 2008 at 07:16am
  • septicemia.

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    The Rumor.:
    That chapter was absolutely amazing. There's no other way to describe it, it was just stunning. Perfect even. Seriously - just - wow.

    That was amazing, I'm speechless.

    When I saw that you updated there was a big, 'SCORE!' yelling out in my head but, talk about understatement.

    That was freakin' stunning, seriously. It was perfect.
    February 21st, 2008 at 10:41am
  • The Rumor

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    That chapter was absolutely amazing. There's no other way to describe it, it was just stunning. Perfect even. Seriously - just - wow.

    That was amazing, I'm speechless.

    When I saw that you updated there was a big, 'SCORE!' yelling out in my head but, talk about understatement.

    That was freakin' stunning, seriously. It was perfect.
    February 18th, 2008 at 11:47pm
  • kt-Scissorhands

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    i love this story!!!! Clap
    holy crap that threw me a wobbler when Mikey killed himself......Swoon
    wobbler....:tehe: ...sorry, i laugh at weird words too often...
    that last chapter was sweet at the end though....Smiley
    February 18th, 2008 at 08:30pm
  • bringmoreknivesx

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    Fucking finally.
    That was simply awesome.
    February 18th, 2008 at 08:15pm
  • t'lema

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    *new reader*

    Amazing, I just subscribed :D

    Great writer, you're really talented with your description. Can't wait for more!
    February 18th, 2008 at 04:58pm
  • prototype.

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    Fuck, that was soo amazing!

    you're a good writer! Kepp it coming!
    February 18th, 2008 at 12:01pm
  • Mindfreak.

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    :tehe:
    That was hot.

    Great job!
    ^_____^.
    You should update again soon.
    Cause yeah.
    The wait on this is cruel and unusual torture.
    :file:

    :tehe:
    February 17th, 2008 at 11:32pm
  • frankatiero

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    Aw they so love each other! Great job!
    February 17th, 2008 at 10:11pm
  • mcris1love

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    This story is great. I was not expecting an update. I saw the notice in my inbox and rushed over to read it. Frank still seems like an enigma, but with each passing moment with Gerard I think he'll open up more (at least that's what I hope happens).

    Loved it,
    -M-
    February 17th, 2008 at 08:10pm
  • KranK

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    ooooh....sexy.
    Aw! Fwankie wuvs him!!!!
    i didnt expect him to give in to himself so soon..like, he actually feels someting for Gerard. It so awesome!
    <33
    February 17th, 2008 at 01:51pm
  • Tom Fletcher.

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    Mind-blowing.
    I can hardly describe how talented you are - the description, the metaphors - everything.
    Keep it coming. ^^
    February 17th, 2008 at 11:31am
  • Alexithymia.

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    Finally... it happened...

    'But it's hard to deny it when you realize you just found the person you can't ever let go of.'

    That line fucking got me... I never even seen it coming...
    February 17th, 2008 at 10:07am
  • The Way

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    Officially one of my most favorite frerards ever. :XD
    February 17th, 2008 at 10:01am
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