October 2nd, 2011 at 03:21pm
Friction - Comments
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there is nothing wrong with this story. i love it. please please please write more!August 3rd, 2011 at 10:22pm
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:l I keep day dreaming about this story! XDAugust 30th, 2009 at 03:37am
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amazing updateAugust 19th, 2009 at 03:53am
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Ohmygod.August 14th, 2009 at 10:28pm -
Wow, I love this story :D
It's so different and intersting, great writing, by the way [:
Can't wait for more! <3August 12th, 2009 at 02:48am -
WOW!
I have this look on my face i generally only ever get when i see "Free chocolate"
WOW!
Just
WOW! I cant WAIT for you to update again!!! I love it!August 9th, 2009 at 07:34am -
:yah Wow. The ending was incredible. I mean, the entire thing was amazing, but the part where Frank was just standing there watching Gerard and wanting to go home was my favorite. It made my heart race and I kept having to re-read it, because the suspense was killing me and I kept reading it too fast.
I wish I could go in a little more detail and show you how absolutely brilliant I find this story, but to be honest this has left me speechless.August 9th, 2009 at 03:04am -
I love this story so very much. Please, you have to update, I'm hanging in like Frank wondering what the hell Gerard is going to say!
But honestly, I love it. Your writing is fantastic and absolutely captivating.
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“I have to go home,” I tell him. “I gotta feed my cat.”
HAHA! Surly, sarcastic and blatantly honest characters are so much fun to read.February 8th, 2009 at 06:11pm -
great updateJanuary 24th, 2009 at 07:15pm
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Wow....you're such a good author. I can't beleive how original yet realistic this is =]
More soon please.January 6th, 2009 at 08:03am -
So, this is amazing, like it always is, you motherfuckin' talent box. ;D
Pft, trying to tell me it wasn't very good.
LIES I TELL YOU, IT WAS LIESSSSSSS.
-eye twitches-
Anyways, yeah, I took a break from csi: miami to write you this shitty review, and it's only nine at night and I'm so tired I could pass out right now. ahaha.
Yeah.
I really like how you can work in flashbacks without italics. It's really unique and not very many people can do it and actually seem to pull it off.
Yesyesyes.
'cause yew is supahwomannn <3January 4th, 2009 at 01:28am -
wow, I've missed this story.
reread the whole thing - its amazing, please please please don't leave us hanging and update soon
watching frank slowly get attached to gerard is perfect and you depict it beautifully.
I wonder what gerard works as?
update soon! xxJanuary 2nd, 2009 at 02:21pm -
:D:D:D
I have missed this! One of the very few good stories on mibba!January 2nd, 2009 at 03:35am -
I last commented on this story in June. JUNE!!
So yeah, you should be sorry for making me wait that long and forgetting half the storyline... thankfully, it's not a forgettable story, so I only had to read back four chapters or so. ;)
I'm so glad this is back! Pleeeeeeeeease don't wait seven months to post again, please?
*tries to look cute*
I'll... uh... wish you happy birthday every day for a YEAR if you post before the 10th of January.
And you know you want that.
:DJanuary 2nd, 2009 at 02:34am -
Frank's... I don't know. He's so weird.
Cue the lights for an update.January 1st, 2009 at 08:08am -
*penis explodes*
I don't think that was supposed to happen. xD
Dear god! I'm glad to see an unpdate for this story!
Fucking epic!
I think Frank and Gerard should start a phone! xDJanuary 1st, 2009 at 02:44am -
i liked the beginning with the background on his brother....:shock:
and how he was totally numb at his job.....
what was gerard going to say?!?!?!
i wanna know!!!!!!
January 1st, 2009 at 02:42am -
you better be sorry. just kidding. XD
another amazing chapter, it could seriously turn out into a movie, i love the storyline.December 31st, 2008 at 10:20pm
xx