They're Playing Our Song - Comments

“Oh. Okay.” I was only a bit disappointed, and I was more nervous. What was I going to do with Mr. Way alone in his room for 45 minutes?

Oh come on people. Minds out of the gutter. I’m serious.

I laughed when I read that. It's such a you thing to say... are you sure you said that so I wouldn't think nasty things? You do know me...

I loved the updates, they were short, which made me want more! And oh, Mary has to go to the library during lunch? What a shame.... (I'M ON TO YOU, WOMAN!)

Oh, and one thing you should fix is when it said "Ass whopping" and it should be "whooping". At least, that's what I think. It could be the different regions but ehhhh....

Anyway, I loved the updates, they were awesome. Please update soon!

O.o I really really really like this story.
Ahahaha, I can't wait for an update.
Didn't pick up on anything that could be improved/altered.
It was great. :cheese:

Ohhhh..... entertainment. Cant wait!

I like this story, please update soon :)

I hate that we don't have edits for these comments :\

Please disregard my spelling errors.

I lvoe d the update, my brain is all mushy from writing my outline, so I can't point anything specificly out. Except Cherry-Broke road. Heh, I laughed when I read that. Hehehe.

Yeah, I loved it, you are an amazing write and I want you to write more plz!! :

Thanks for all the praise guys. Updates coming soon. =]

Killer story!! I LOVE it!!

Awesome!!!
Love it so far!
you are really good.

this story is pretty awesome(:
update soon xo

I love this story! <3 So great! : )

I rolled mt eyes

The T should be a Y, if you want to fix that :cute:

Oooh, she has mixed feelings! Gosh I love this! Update soon!