Repercussions of Love - Comments

ahh Marc and Sam were so close!! I think they should just kiss and get it over with lol you know they both want to!
I feel so bad for Eric, he's such a mess!
Poor Jared...the only one right now with no issues lol
I'm glad Jordan went after Caitlin and he's convincing her to come back! She really needs to talk to Eric!

Awww I love how Jordans so truthful and convinces me to go back! Why would I ever leave Eric Staal haah

wow

thats all :D

I love how well Jordan understands her. And when he saw her tears it was sad. I'm feeling bad for Eric though. I can't wait to see what'll happen when she and Jordan get back to Thunder Bay. No one ever said Eric and Caitlin's relationship would be easy. Amazing job! I loved it!

I know how you feel about flowing stories. My Toews one seems to flow better than my Staal one, lol

I'm sorry about how long this is.

His biggest fear was waking up one morning and having Caitlin gone.
I agree with that. I'm scared about that too.

"No one is Caitlin mom," he said. He paused for a moment, while his mother waited patiently to see if he'd continue. "You should probably know I was the one that broke it off, not her. It was the last thing I wanted to do, but she wasn't in love with me. She was in love with someone else." His mother took a deep breath wondering if Marc knew what she knew. "I can't compete with Eric," he continued. "I don't want to compete with him. I want her to love me."
excuse me while my heart breaks for marc. even though i'm team eric. that still hurts me.. I mean I do have a heart..

"Come to peace with what exactly Jodan? The fact that Caitlin is in love with Eric? The fact that I can't have her because Eric needs to have a wife and a whore on the side."

"Marc!" Jared said, wanting to defend Caitlin.

"That's what she is, his whore right. Eric has always been so god damn selfish and this, this is just the cherry on the fucking cake. That's some sweet deal he has."
wow. that was intense...

"Answer me momma's boy," she said and didn't let go.
HAHAHAHAHAHHAA! way to take control sam!

Instead he decided to take a walk.
oh shit. marc, no, take the beer kid.

Anger pulsed through his veins as he watched his selfish older brother claim everything he had ever wanted.
um, wow.

“Well let’s see, there’s Letang, and the goalie, oh and how about fifty other hockey players who all wish you’d give them the time of day.”
I love how hank is just the goalie. I love it, so much.

I’m hurt that you didn’t think enough of this family, a family that includes you in every way to stop behaving like a child.”
wow. I didn't expect mama staal to be so harsh.. that hurt me. *tears*

'She must be one bad mother fucker in bed,' Sam thought, but would never dare say it out loud.
HAHAHAHA! could you imagine how marc would react?!!? that would be something worth seeing.

“That’s for me to know and you to figure out.”
caitlin will always keep eric on his toes, that much is obvious. (I totally almost spelt that as toews!!! HAHAHA!)

Tanya!" he said startled. "Tanya." She didn't respond, and her eyes rolled back in her head. He picked her up and carried her to their room laying her on the bed. Holding her hand, he whispered "Tanya, wake up. Wake up." He didn't know what to do, should he take her to a hospital? At that moment he could think of only one person who could help him.
FUCK! GOD DAMN IT! RAWR! ugh, this makes everything complicated. now eric's going to feel so guilty! damn it!

"What the fuck! You got your belly button pierced."
oh sharpie. so observant.

"Why are you playing big brother? I thought that was Marc's job."
ouch. ego hit.

Everyone at the table had a strong reaction to Eric's statement. Patrick was shocked and lost for words; Jordan couldn't believe Eric would make such a bold announcement, and Caitlin almost choked over the word boyfriend.
this picture makes me laugh.

This Brian guy seemed to be holding her back from everything good in her life.
marc baby. someone is kinda doing that to you..

“Tanya!” Caitlin gasped.
*mouth drops* biggest oh shit moment EVER.

In a very fluid movement Tanya pulled her arm back and slapped Caitlin across her face. Her cheek stung, and her eyes watered as Tanya laughed a morbid sick laugh.
holy shit.

Eric panicked and there was no use hiding it from his brothers. He tugged roughly on his hair. Things had been so good between him and Caitlin, even this morning. Why would she leave? "Fuck Jordan!" he screamed grabbing his brother by his shirt. "I can't lose her."
oh baby. :[ CAITLIN! DON'T LISTEN TO THAT DUMB, BITTER BITCH!

Jordan could see tears welling up in his brother's eyes and suddenly any doubt that he had that Eric was madly in love with Caitlin and not just looking for a nightly good lay faded. "We'll find her, bro. I promise." Eric's grip on him loosened. "Jared you drive Eric to the airport and see if you can find her. I'm going to call the magazine to see where they sent her." His brother obeyed and just as Eric was about to leave with Jared, Jordan stopped them. "Eric. She loves you man, something made her run. She loves you."
this is amazing. This captured the moment perfectly.

this is so long because it took me forever to read this.
holy shit do I regret it.. this is just as amazing as the first one. oh my god.
I"M FREAKING OUT!
you need to update. holy shit. holy crap. ohmygod!
I'm going to die!
WHY IS SHE RUNNING!? I THOUGHT WE WERE PAST THIS!?

wow! love the update! you are one amazing writer! can't wait for more.

I adore this story! There is so much passion, and love and drama. Its a perfect mix and you have amazing writing skills!

Ahhhh That was seriously intense!!! Very Intense

Ahh! Cliff hanger! I want to know what's gonna happen.

Awesome job as usual. Can't wait to see what you do with the cliff hanger.

Damn Tanya really laid into Caitlin and then she high tails it? Broke my heart. I get the feeling that Marc might be able to stop her from leaving, so I am sooooo looking forward to the next chapter!!!

I'm sorry, Caitlin deserved that.
I don't hate her or anything but everyone knows I was team Marc this entire time which also kind of makes me team Tanya and she is devastated.
On the flip side, I do feel bad that Caitlin left and is obviously freaking the shit out of Eric.
And holy cliffhanger...please don't make us wait to long for another chapter.
I want to see what's going to go down with Marc & Caitlin.
More soon. <3

caitlin running away on eric seriously breaks my heart, he's so in love with her.
I really hope Caitlin doesn't try anything with Marc now....god this cliff hanger is going to kill me!
update asap please!

I understand Tanya is devastated but jeez!
I cant believe Caitlin ran! she can't do that to Eric!!
hmm wonder what's gonna happen at the airport...especially if Jared and Eric get there....
excited for the next!

ahhhhh i love this chapter!

favorite story on this website <3 (:

ohhh jeez. this is incredible.
can't wait to see what happens next :)

Wow that scene with Caitlin & Tanya was intense !
And poor Eric, I hope he finds her before she leaves ....
The ending, wow ! I'll be on pins and needles until the next chapter, perhaps this is the confrontation we've been waiting for ??
Anyways, great chapter ! I loved it as usual <333

oh no! what is Tanya doing at her house.

I love it so far. I can't wait for more!

OMG Tanya lol and Sam is getting anoying... lmao not sure why though... he should go back to caitlin lol
Update :D

I can't believe Tanya showed up at Caitlin's place. That is gonna get interesting and even more so if Eric shows up while she's there expecting something, LOL.

Marc and Sam seem to be getting closer and closer. can't wait for the next chapters.