Repercussions of Love - Comments

I love these stories so much. Just when i think i know where you're going, you switch directions. Can't stop reading.

I just discovered this series a few days ago and have been reading around the clock! I am in great need of sleep but I cannot stop reading!

I think you've done even better with this story and I read it as soon as I could.
I'm really excited to read the next one :)

I just finished and I loved it! I cannot wait to start the next story!

I love it so far! I cannot wait to read more but I REALLY need sleep!

I love it so far! I cannot wait to read more but I REALLY need sleep!

I am so glad that I am finally on the second part to the story. I am however really nervous to see how this turns out. Nervous, but really excited!

Finally finished this. SO GOOD! Seriously. I want Jordan to find someone!!!!! And I wnat to know what happens with Jared and Grace!

I love it! I actually like Caitlin and Eric together now. But I need Marc to get some!!! Hope Sam turns out to be good for him!

i don't care if sam saved caitlin, i still want her to punch her right in the mouth. that would make me genuinely happy.

soooooo i'm on chapter 17 of this, and i need to get this out.
caitlin is a giant raging bitch who doesn't deserve to be happy.
she clearly doesn't want any of those boys to be happy without her and i hope she ends up old and alone and with std's.
with that being said, it's great writing!
okay, going back to read more.

Okay, I have waited long enough to comment. I found your stories by reading another person's stories and she just kept referring to "Pensrock". So once I finished her stories, I looked you up and I have to say, you totally do ROCK! (As do the Pens!) I read "Growing Up Staal" and now this one, and am totally in love with your writing. You drew me right in from the very first line I read and I was going to comment after reading the first story, but got started on this one and just couldn't stop reading it until the last sentence! You have an amazing talent for writing, there just aren't enough words to express how much I love your stories. I will not stop until I have read every last story you have on here. I have read many stories on Mibba since becoming a member so that I could come on and read my daughter's stories, and I have to say you are absolutely one of my FAVORITE authors on this site. I hope you continue to write, as you are definitely a natural talent. All I can say is absofreakinlutely amazing! So....onto the next story! :0)

Love, love, love chapter 28!!!! So priceless. :)

I'm on chapter 16 and loving the story! You've definitely turned me over to Team Eric pretty quickly. :p As for that Sam chick, I CANNOT stand her... at all.

Great job!

Hails :)

So I just spent the last few days reading Growing Up Staal and then this...holy shit, amazing stories!

I love this story. I love how into the characters you are and you made me fall in love with the Staal's!! haha. Another sequel would be fun to do!! I hope you do.

i miss this story please update soon!!! :)

Okay, this took me forever to comment. So sorry!

Anyways, there isn't much I can say that hasn't been said by your many, faithful readers. I just have to say how much I love each brother's individual endings. But I feel a tad sad for Jordan. Each Staal got their girl, but Jordan is alone. But I guess that's just how he rolls.

It was adorable to read how Caitlin and Eric became people they never expected to be. It was great to see Marc fall in love with Sam. It was just great reading this whole thing!

And it was especially awesome to see how Jared learned how to be a Staal.

He had to remind himself that sex, no matter how amazing, was not the reason Caitlin was tied to the bed.
HAHAHAHAHHAHA. oh my god. only caitlin would need to be tied to the bed for a different reason than sex.. god that is funny

She wasn’t leaving. she had no intention of going anywhere, but she understood his fear. She’d bailed on him one too many times, and in some sick twisted way, him tying her to the bed meant he loved her.
you wouldn't have to be tied to the bed if he wasn't freaked you would be gone in the morning, which he has learned from a handful of experiences! :p anyway, yes. tying her to the bed does mean he loves her.. no matter how weird of a way it is hahaha

He never would have guessed she'd be the love of his life, that she'd some day evoke feelings in him that were so strong he'd give everything up for her.
ohhhh <3 <3 <3 that is soo soo sweet. have I mentioned how much I love them lately??? :D

"I tied you to the fucking bed so you'd have to listen, so you wouldn't run off."
sooo.. at first I wasn't really nervous about what Eric had to say to her.. but not that it's coming i'm kinda tweaking.. like.. what if it's bad.. I just wrote it off as good.. uh oh..

"Even when you weren't there, you were there. I remember sitting on a plane, holding Tanya's hand starting our new life together. All I could think of was that I had to find a way to give you up and it made me sick inside."
he's always loved her <3 and he is totally making my eyes tear up...

With a perfectly straight face, showing no emotion whatsoever, Caitlin said, "How's Tuesday?"...... "That you could be fucking me senseless right now, if you just let me talk. My stuff's all packed, it's been shipped and will arrive on Tuesday."
OHMYGOD! HILARIOUS! I LOVE HOW NONCHALANT SHE IS ABOUT IT! how's tuesday??? bahahahhahaha hilarious and totally caitlin :D

"Yes," he whispered, feeling more like Jordan than himself, but loving every minute of it. Maybe he was a Staal after all.
HAHAHAHAHHAHAA *DIES* OHMYGOD.... CLASSIC.

Yes it still hurt, but only a little, and it hurt less every morning when he woke up with his rocker chick girlfriend beside him.
I feel like Marc has come full circle and I'm glad because now I don't have to hate him anymore! yaaaay!

"You're never going to fall in love Jordan. It's never going to happen. You're never going to find someone you love more than Caitlin. Better to just admit it now before you hurt someone else."
BUT ONLY IN THE FRIEND WAY! ONLY IN THE FRIEND WAY!!!!!! DON'T RUIN JORDAN AND CAITLIN! *WAILS*

"It's the end of an era Eric. No more sneaking around. No more trying to figure out when we'll see each other again. No more late night rendezvous. Will you miss it, now that I'm not the forbidden fruit?"
no way. he loves her too damn much. he'd never get sick of her <3

It's not the end it's just the beginning.
thank god.

FUCK! i hate endings.. even if this isn't really an ending...
I love the staals.. and of course caitlin and eric together <3
they are too amazing and I am so happy things around going great <3
and YES caitlin and eric belong together. don't even try to sell to me that they don't. I know these things phoebe.. I KNOW! :p
and honestly.. I think jordan needs a girl just like him.. teresa was too passive for him.. and just.. not what he needed.. he needs someone who can run wild with him.. but of course NOT CAITLIN BECAUSE SHE BELONGS WITH ERIC!
btw, you need to do a sequel.. it isn't even a maybe thing.. it's a OKAY I'LL GO DO THAT FOR YOU BRIANNA thing.
mhm
anyways, I miss them already.. write them again.. and soon.. I can't wait that long *sobs*

okay i still can't believe i didn't comment. i could SWEAR i did. lol. anyways...

being tied to the bed, naked, by a hockey player? yes please!
him doing it out of love and not just animal lust? Yes pleassseee!

Caitlin watched him pace around, not realizing he was nervous, and not understanding that this had nothing to do with sex, and when he said, “Caitlin, I’m leaving. I have to get to practice,” she was shocked and disappointed.--this made me sad. after everything they've been through...idk, i don't think he should be so afraid of having this kind of talk with her at this point. poor guy.

“Actually I can. The point is you can’t leave.”--again, poor guy! he's so afraid she'll bail on him like she has so many times in the past. she's really effed him up.
She wasn’t leaving. she had no intention of going anywhere, but she understood his fear. She’d bailed on him one too many times, and in some sick twisted way, him tying her to the bed meant he loved her.--exactly. ? haha.

"I used to make fun of those guys, the ones that were so hung up on some chick they could hardly function and now I've become one. I not only love you Caitlin, I need you. I like to think I'm a pretty tough guy, that can take care of myself on and off the ice, but you…" Eric stopped and shook his head gazing down at her. "You are my weakness. God, four months is a long time to be without you, to not know where you are or when you're coming back. Fuck, not knowing if you were coming back to me… I've been a mess, and I don't want to live my life like that."--how sweet. i love it.

well, it's the end of an era--kind of! haha. it wrapped up perfectly, you did a fantastic job at giving a nice end to every character, no questions remain. it was a fitting end for each one, it satisfied me :)

now if you're doing a sequel, don't go messing anything up too much ;)

great writing pheebs, i always say it but it's always true...love you!