Repercussions of Love - Comments

first off the smut in the jordan story was amazing so thank u for that! o and i love this story....i think th girl might be like an ex-girlfriend, or his agent or something or it might just be innocent but reading ur stories im not going to hold my breath for the innocent part :P dont keep us waiting!! so udpate soon?

omfg! i wana know who this blondie is!

PS I agree with Mully17 - I think we need more Zach too...

Hey? What?? Why!?!? HOW?!?!? WTF!?!?&@"?!!!!!

I think that sums up my reaction sufficiently to the end of the chapter....

Good one!

Pardon my crassness... WHO THE FUCK?! Girl, you got some s'plainin' to do!

First, it started out all peachy keen. Not crazy but the "Staal" crazy. And Teresa - glad she came to terms, understood, and accepted it all. That could've been hell easily. Uber glad Jared got the girl! About damn time, if I may say so myself.

Secondly, Mrs White - AHAHAH! Funny! That is a moment that could probably have the most stoic of people blushing. And the whole Jordan being scared of committment I can see so clearly. Oh Jordan, need to stop fretting so much. Keep your carefree ways in a manner that's responsible.

Thirdly (is there a thirdly?), how sweet of Caitlin to do that? FYI, you got me drooling because my mom cooked some pasta last night and there are leftovers in the kitchen which shall be eaten after I post.

Now back to my point: WHO THE FUCK?! You have to post soon because this is a cliffhanger that's got me on the edge of my seat (er- floor).

"Oh you guys are still fucking?" he teased. "I thought old married couples Made Love.
HAHAHHAHAHA. oh jordan :D :D <3

Tomorrow she would have to tell him, and she was pretty sure he wouldn't want to cuddle afterward.
i think I know what this is about.. and I'm positive he will be upset.. awww poor baby :(

She knew it was the right thing and for once in her life the right thing was what she wanted. Sometimes the right decisions weren’t the easy ones, and she laid awake wondering if her happiness with Eric would change everything between her and Jordan.
this is really touching.. I feel bad for jordan.. but caitlin needs to be with eric.. like legit.. but it will be interesting to see how jord still feels about caitlin and eric..

“Look at me Teresa! I’m wearing clothes. I can guarantee you that if Jordan and I spent last night fucking I would be as naked as the day I was born. Now if you still have doubts you need to take it up with Jordan.
hahahahhaa! i love how she is trying to be all nice and then she gets frustrated and all the candy coating goes out the window.. hehehe I love caitlin <3

When Jordan came home from practice she would begin the process of building a life with the man she couldn’t live without.
looooooooooooooveeeeeeeeeee this!!!! <3 <3 sad for jordan.. but still.

He told her Tanger had been moping ever since he heard the news of her and Eric, which she shrugged off knowing she was no good for a guy like Kris Letang
oh ktang.. i will gladly fill the void in your heart <3

“Maybe, but my plan worked. Not even 48 hours later I got a text from J. He sealed the deal with his coaches daughter. I’ll turn that boy into a Staal yet.” Jordan laughed and gave her a fist bump.
hahahhaa that is funny. gee caitlin is SUCH a staal.. no joke.

“The day I was born without a penis. Now tell me what is going on or I swear I’ll find Teresa and ask her myself.”
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHMYGOD! BEST LINE EVER! HAHAHA!

“For fuck’s sake. Yes it could be worse.” They both laughed, and Caitlin leaned over and kissed him softly on the cheek. “I love you Jord.
hahahha well thank god it's only your brother :p

Mrs. White trying to convince her that she in fact did grow up with Eric Staal and wasn't some crazed lunatic trying to steal all his underwear.
BAHAHAHHA CREEEEPY! I can't see caitlin even looking like someone who would do that.. hahaha

"Mrs. White..." When she had her attention Caitlin continued. "For the record, Eric doesn't wear underwear." While the statement wasn't exactly true, Caitlin could hear Mrs. White giggle all the way down the hallway
hahahahha that is funny :)

Caitlin heard a woman's giggle even before she heard the door open. She turned to see the door fly open and Eric walk in laughing with a small blond girl.
THAT FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT! I SWEAR TO FUCKING GOD HE BETTER HAVE A DAMN GOOD REASON. OHMYGOD. OHYMYGOD. OHMYGOD.OHMYGOD. I AM GOING TO SLIT HIS THROAT!

I am so fucking pissed. are you shitting me, Eric!?
if it is what I think it is, caitlin needs to grab a knife and castrate you.. ohmygod what a piece of shit.
and here I was thinking that the only real problem was that when they moved in together, they would be too stressed and feel like they needed their space. apparently not eric staal you piece of shit.
phoebe.. you need to update. what the hell is this! this was not planned! they are supposed to be happy! wtf!!!!!!!!!
*wails!!!!!!!!* PHOEBEEEEEEE DON'T DO THIS TO THEM.. DON'T DO THIS TO ME!!!!
update. please..
btw, this story isn't allowed to end.. and what! a couple months for a sequel.. NOOO! SOON!

I LOVED the update. I can't wait for more! I wanna know who the girl Eric brought home is!
I can't wait for more!!!
Keep it up
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!'

Nooooo!! These cliffhangers you throw kill me. It's just enough to make me go crazy...for a little while at least lol
I'm really excited that you are gonna continue writing Eric and Caitlin! :D
Update soon! I'm dying to know who this hoe he is with is and how this is all gonna go down!

Ok wow first off if Jordan Staal was my best friend wow wouldn't that be awesome, second Kris, Hank and Eric all want me wow!!! Third eric is an asshole at the end, and fourth I am not ready to say goodbye to Eric and Caitlin either!!! P.S. I think we alll need a Zach fix!!

ooh. omg the passion is freaking amazing. i can't wait to see what happens.

sequel! sequel! sequel!

update soon :D

I totally loved the way you brought them back together (in more ways than one ROFL). I equally liked the fact that you conveyed them both thinking so much about what they want from their futures - but that they just can't find the words to say them out loud...

They sure have a lot of talking to do. I wonder if they do get married though? I mean, I know it's the done thing and all, but something tells me that even when Caitlin's committed her heart and soul to someone, she'll still need to have something that makes her feel free as a bird, entire hockey team of offspring with Eric as a mandatory obviously LOL. I see them finally doing the deed, at about 60, after many years of happiness, fighting and make-up sex... Dunno why. And I also see her married on the beach in a cream sarong knotted round her neck, barefoot, ankle bracelet, flower behind her ear, Eric in some god-awful Hawaiian shirt, both barefoot, at sunset, taking the vows....

Hmm - but whatever is planned, I know it will be good!

haha, Phoebe, you're so dirty. It was nice to see you take my advice. Gotta be honest though, i expected much more explicit sexual desire between caitlin and the chick, but it's not about them; its about her and eric. i loved the build up as he was waiting for her, looking for her. he knew she was there but of course she's got to play somewhat hard to get. can't make it too easy on the guy now can we girls?

their sex was hott, not gonna lie. who doesnt like hot sex? and it's a combination of a lot of things. its not angry sex or make up sex or raw 'i gotta have you now, i love you sex'-- its ALL those things built up into one....and they've been apart for so long...so the feeling of wanting has got to be off the hook. being in love makes those feelings and the sex so much more erotic. so im imaging they were pretty damn tired when they were through. oh, and i know you think i was taken aback by the dirty sexcapade, but i wasn't. like i said, i've read borderline offensive sexual situations...you handle it tackfully (as you usually do)

i'm not exactly shocked that she was gone when eric woke up...btu whatever. he chose to love her he's gotta deal with her shit. (and she has a lot of it) you know she isnt my favorite but i know there is more drama coming and i know they're both going to have to realize how much they love each other...make the decision as to what exactly their future holds. the running away is either going to get to a point where she runs away and its done, or she stops and they're together no matter what. somethings gonna make her put her big girl pants on and figure it out...i just dont see how these two havent killed each other by now lol. seriously though, it was very very well written. but i would expect nothing less from you. i would have pointed out certain things but, well, idk how comfortable i am quoting back massive erections and screaming orgasms lol. you know i liked it...and i'm glad you took my idea :)
love you!

It was filled with alcoves and booths and he was beginning to wonder if this was some sort of sick joke. Looking at the bracelet in his hand, gave him the motivation to stay, to find her.
that would be a terrible joke.. and it would make me cry!

"Well you can join me and my friends while you wait. There they are." She extended her arm and pointed toward the dance floor.
NO! SAY NO! SAY NO! DON'T DO ANYTHING STUPID ERIC STAAL!

A dark skinned woman's hand's traced her curves, but Caitlin's bright blue eyes were locked on him.
oh caitlin :p

It was an erotic fantasy come to life yet it pissed him off so badly that for the first time in his life he considered hitting a woman.
ohmygod. don't please. but this is just another token of how much he loves her. lol he's jealous of another woman :D hahaha!

While just the sight of him made her forgive him, Caitlin wanted to torture him for a moment. She hesitated, gasping for breath before she breathed out a simple, "I love you."
leave it to these two to have a huge fight and then have it all be better in two sentences :p I can't complain though. I definitely benefit from it :D

"We go upstairs right now, or I fuck you right up against this wall. You chose." Eric's breath was shallow and his heart raced. He had to have her.
damn

Caitlin's body literally shook with excitement and desire. "The wall sounds tempting, but I've avoided being arrested this long, let's keep it that way."
HAHAHAHAHHA!

"You're so beautiful," he said breaking the silence. "You have the face of an Angel…" then he added, "but I'm glad you don't fuck that way."
HAHAHAHAHA! Eric! that is ridiculously dirty! but it's kinda true.. i guess.. i mean I'm fanning myself here.. holy shit. you weren't kidding.

He wanted to marry her, make babies, buy her crazy expensive things, things she didn't want or need but she deserved for making him so happy. He wanted to tell her all those things but he didn't.
first of all, i LOVEEE the idea of staal babies :D second of all, he should have told her. third of all, I understand why he didn't because.. well.. she would have been freaked out

The note that said she'd meet him back in North Carolina.
WTF. caitlin.. you are SUCH a pain in the ass!

NOOOOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
NO ENDINGS! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!
I HATE ENDINGS!
yup.. there needs to be a third sequel.. that way i can live :D
but seriously.. WHERE DID SHE GO!? AND SHE BETTER BE IN CAROLINA WHEN HE IS! I AM DEAD SERIOUS.
I will cry. straight up ball my eyes out. why does she ALWAYS leave. ALWAYS.
their huge problem is miscommunication. No, you can't express everything through looks and sex, Caitlin and Eric. You actually need to have a conversation!
UGH! if they would have told each other how they felt.. then maybe it would be okay.
seriously, she better have a good reason for dipping.
but this was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! and THANK YOU for not making me wait!
now, don't make me wait long again! cause i wanna know why she left!
more soon??? :D thanks!
btw, there also needs to be a 3rd because they need to have kids. end of story. that will lock caitlin up for good.

that chapter was amazing but I'm kinda bummed she left! I wouldn't mind a sequel...

I cannot begin to tell you what I think!

The personal level and the intimacy that was reached in that chapter was... damn. The sizzling passion and the unwritten words of greatness.

I'm just speechless right now. Others can put the words down that it looks like I can't.

Will be waiting for the next chapters and heart wrenching emotions! And maybe a sequel...? Eh...?

Two updates so close together! We are so damn spoiled!!!!!!!!

This was so exceptionally hot. And so very well written! I like how it didn't just jump into the smut and we got a peek at a nervous and anxious Eric. It was a nice touch showing him all 'out of sorts' while looking for her; shows that he's committed to working shit out and that he'll stop at nothing to do it. I gotta admit, I was a little worried when he walked into that club; I thought for sure that he'd see her with some dude and get the wrong impression and just go batshit crazy. So it was a really great touch that it was a woman that she was having a good time with and I really liked how he was all turned on as hell about it (what men doesn't wanna see two chicks going all touchy feeling on each other?) and then go all stark raving jealous as soon as the kiss happenend. A kiss is uber personal. Remember how Julia Roberts explained it in Pretty Woman? About why she didn't kiss the men she slept with? Kissing is intimate and it changes something from being just about sex to being about real feelings and emotions. At least that's my opinion. And Eric was having none of that shit. At all.

It's hard to review smut without sounding like a total perv. LOL. But as far as sex scenes go, what went down between Eric and Caitlin was exceptionally hot and well written. Those two are just sizzling. There's no denying it. There's this incredible sexual chemistry yet so many other emotions and feelings are rolled into one. Makes it even HOTTER. And I loved how there were softer, more intimate moments tossed in: soft kisses, the giggling and teasing, the cuddling. It was a great touch.

And I LOVED how she described being with a woman over a man and the differences. How true is that? I am so with her: hard and rough. Pretty please.

Christ...now she's left and Eric has his panties in a twist. The boy needs some anger management counselling!!!!!!!

Looking forward to more!

Sequal pleaseee!

Im speechless. I don. Know what to tell you. My mind seems like its overflowing right now so i cant even come up with an idea to help you out or anything.
Take this as a compliment. MARRIAGE. Babies :) lol

Aww ok I love the sex I will admit it! It was fucking amazing!

P.S. If you don't do a sequal I will be mad

I want to keep reading about them!!! please :)
why did she leave? :(