Dark Temptation...A Twisted Romance - Comments

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

Will there ever be more?

PLEASE UPDATE! This story is awesome!!

keep updating. its really interesting. lol! bam's a dog/wolf

please update!

I love this story. I discovered it on Raven616 profile, and I'm glad I decided to read it. :)
I read all the chapters in one night, with all the sex games and the pool parties, I just couldn't stop.
Mibba lately is being the responsable for my lack of sleeping, but I really don't care. xD

Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of this lovely story. <3

mmmmm-freaking-rawr!

cute and yummy!

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I read the whole story so far over... and I realized that the first few chapter of this story was going very well... I mean the tempo was amazing. It made me wanna crave for more... but then you slowed down the tempo.... even though I still wanna read more of this story... I miss the old times.

When we gonna read more about Sex games...? LOL

I know what you mean and the reason for this is that I wanted more plot and character development. The kinky stuff is fun for me to write all but I felt that this story needed a time when Ville and Lydia were just a 'normal' couple. Just wait, this next chapter and the ones fallowing I have some devilish ideas. I also thought that since they are about to basically get married, Ville wouldn't want to scare Lydia out of sex and he would be less...dominating and more basic when it comes to just fooling around. Am I making sense?

New chapter to come soon and I am also about to post a new story loosely inspired by 'The Lost Boys'. I had this story up before on another account but I deleted it and decided to rewrite it, and this story is going to be pretty intense...so if you like this one than you'll most likely like this new story. So keep an eye out for it.

I read the whole story so far over... and I realized that the first few chapter of this story was going very well... I mean the tempo was amazing. It made me wanna crave for more... but then you slowed down the tempo.... even though I still wanna read more of this story... I miss the old times.

When we gonna read more about Sex games...? LOL

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Excellent chapter! Loved every delicious tidbit of it, poor bam haha, although in one of the paragraphs when there making love you change like the point of view from like 2nd to 3rd and back again haha :)

Well that's embarrassing! I really need to prof read theses better. It'd be so much easier with a regular beta, but no one gets back to me quick enough.

Anyone interested in betaing this story? The typos are driving me mad and I never catch all of them right after writing the chapter because I still have the correct version in my mind.

I really like this story

THANK HEAVENS im so happy you updated, i hope your problems are simmering down and that everything is getting better in your life darling

Excellent chapter! Loved every delicious tidbit of it, poor bam haha, although in one of the paragraphs when there making love you change like the point of view from like 2nd to 3rd and back again haha :)

wow that was worth to wait for... but I can't wait for the next chapter...^_^ update please soon......

yayyy updateee :)
i wonder if Bam wanted to play Marco Polo so he could "accidentally" cop a feel hahaha

I really love this so far and I must say that it is one of the best stories on here ^^

i loveee this story
update soon?? :)

UPDATE! :D
Thanks so much, I really enjoy reading it. Ah and I love pool parties ^^
Hope things get better for you sooner than later.

ahhh update again! :) Im so sorry though for your family troubles, and i hope things get better.