Music Biz - Comments

Sorry, don't mean to be nitpicky, but at the start, you go "I already sing it two [octaves] higher than I originally intended" and you know, that'd be impossible. Octaves are big, man. She wouldn't have written it that low that when transposed two octaves higher, it'd need to be transposed up even more. Maybe say "I'm already singing it two tones higher" or something.

So, yeah. Otherwise, no problems.

Oh, and you spelled "definitely" wrong. XD

That was a nice chapter. ^^,

Except, I've got one problem with it. When you go up an octave, you're not changing key. It's still the same one. And you wouldn't need to play higher on the piano.

XD

Just a heads up.

Anyway, I liked this very much. ^^, Brandi sounds like a dickhead.

This story moves so...very, very sweetly and smoothly. I love it, and I think I'll go ahead and subscribe, too. :)

XD This was pretty funny, despite your bad mood. I'm sorry you're in one!

Hanyway, this was a cool chapter. I felt like punching that Brandi there. Stupid fake ass bitch.

-Cough- Excuse me.

^^ That was a really cool chapter, actually. I don't know why you don't like it that much.

XD

Looking forward to the collaboration.

:cute: Aw, that was nice.

So... what is this mysterious event about my past? :think: Is it the acting or something else? -doublethink-

I love a good story about making it into the world, and this one is already looking awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Awesomeness!
Your writing seems a notch up in this one. :cute:

:tehe: Hoorah, hoorah, a story about me! :D

I love it so far. :cute: It's gonna be interesting, what with you not knowing my personality and all, but I have a good feeling about this. :XD

And I love the name too!

-subscribes-

Wewt, first to comment!
The prologue is pretty introductive.
Maybe the second chapter can go into a bit of their lives more?
I loved it though. Keep it up. :]