Hurricane Adam - Comments

Axsm. (100)

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Samantha Jo.:
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Again,

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Hi

August 30th, 2009 at 12:23am

Axsm. (100)

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August 22nd, 2009 at 06:20pm

Billy Corgan. (200)

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oh, woah.
I couldn't read the first few sentences. :shifty
The layout is extremely cramped.

August 22nd, 2009 at 03:45pm

Sj Peltier (270)

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This sounds really sad so far. But it went by so quickly. I think you should add more detail to the paragraphs, they're kind of short.
I like the plot though... it's really original.
Keep up the good work.

August 22nd, 2009 at 03:30pm