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  • Axsm.

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    Samantha Jo.:
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    Again,

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    Hi
    August 30th, 2009 at 12:23am
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    August 22nd, 2009 at 06:20pm
  • Billy Corgan.

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    oh, woah.
    I couldn't read the first few sentences. :shifty
    The layout is extremely cramped.
    August 22nd, 2009 at 03:45pm
  • Sj Peltier

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    This sounds really sad so far. But it went by so quickly. I think you should add more detail to the paragraphs, they're kind of short.
    I like the plot though... it's really original.
    Keep up the good work.
    August 22nd, 2009 at 03:30pm
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