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  • painting flowers

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    That poor girl. I can't describe how curious I am about her story.
    Thanks for updating =)
    November 17th, 2009 at 10:52pm
  • Ben Barnes

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    You're such an amazing writer, I really like your writing style. :)
    I can't wait for the next update! I love this story.
    November 17th, 2009 at 05:40pm
  • crossed out name.

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    I am so excited to see more of this. I really love the way that you've written this and I'm incredibly intrigued with Isabella's history and hope that she is going to actually let John in and help her through whatever this Mark situation is.
    Please update again soon (:
    November 17th, 2009 at 04:23pm
  • emmerpixie

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    :O:O. I like how he's being protective but not annoying :):)
    November 17th, 2009 at 12:58pm
  • Alexandre Franceschi

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    I don't know where it's google, but I want to know what happens next! :D
    November 17th, 2009 at 08:57am
  • camera ready kids.

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    John is such a sweetie ^__^
    Haha, you lucky duck, having your own personal JohnOhh drive you to go shopping ;D

    Anyways (:
    I wonder why the bruises are there :\
    I hope John doesn't completely flip out and scare her away...

    Update sooon <333
    November 17th, 2009 at 03:57am
  • erratic

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    Wow.
    You have no idea how excited I was when I checked my e-mail and saw that you'd updated :)

    Now onto the actual comment:
    I don't want to jump to any conclusions, but I doubt that those bruises weren't self-inflicted.
    Whether she wants to or not, Isabella has some explaining to do.

    As always, I'll be patiently waiting to find out what you have in store.
    November 17th, 2009 at 03:17am
  • hip to be square

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    oh poor girl :( hopefully john can help her.

    this is so excellent.
    November 17th, 2009 at 02:26am
  • love like this.

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    First off, when I saw the notification for this in my email I squealed. XD

    Second, WHAT ARE THESE BRUISES?! If they are from this Mark person, and I think they are, it's quite shocking to me, but i think it's an excellent turn in the story. I can't wait to read more.
    November 17th, 2009 at 02:13am
  • cynicalqueen

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    This is getting really interesting, and I'm dying for more. I wonder who was calling her and why she's ignoring them... more soon, yes?
    November 13th, 2009 at 02:32am
  • decadent

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    i'm not going to make an effort right now for i've spent the half of my day on planes and in airports and i'm simply not capable of it, but i am going to take a second to say this is an absolutely amazing story and i love it.
    November 11th, 2009 at 12:44am
  • Logan Lerman

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    I'm so sorry I wasn't able to comment on that last one, hun!
    I didn't receive the email notification, strangely enough
    but trust me; I definetly would have commented... I always do for every story I'm subscribed to :)
    but on another note: I absolutely adored this chapter!
    I like how John is trying to get closer to her but the walls she built around herself aren't helping him.
    I'm anxious to find out just how he'll manage to find a way to get to her :)
    awww, and I feel so bad for poor little Travis
    he's so 'bouncy' and happy and just a downright sweetheart!
    I hope things go okay between him and her :/

    I really, really enjoy you're writing and don't think for one second that I don't :D
    update soon please! :DD
    <33
    November 11th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • painting flowers

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    Thank you so much for updating =)
    Your writing style really is amazing, and I love the plot. It still amazes me every time I read it how good this story is.
    November 10th, 2009 at 03:58am
  • Ben Barnes

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    I really like this story!
    I'm excited to see where it goes! :)
    November 10th, 2009 at 03:07am
  • thoughtology.

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    I love how you put in a certain suspenseful air to the story, it makes things exciting.
    November 9th, 2009 at 05:05am
  • erratic

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    You've definitely got me intrigued.
    Who is the mystery person constantly calling Isabella?
    And why is she so set on ignoring said person?

    As usual, I can't wait to read more.
    This is quite an amazing story you have going.
    :)
    November 9th, 2009 at 04:46am
  • Zombie.Highway

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    I liked your newest chapter, can't wait to see what's next!
    November 9th, 2009 at 04:03am
  • camera ready kids.

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    John's her SAAAAAVIOUR x33
    I love how you describe things rather than just jumping into dialogue (:
    It's one of the many things I love about your story ^_^

    Update soon? <333
    November 9th, 2009 at 03:11am
  • xoxo1234

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    soo good :))
    November 9th, 2009 at 01:29am
  • kimberlymarie

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    I love this story so much. (:
    November 9th, 2009 at 01:17am