I am so excited to see more of this. I really love the way that you've written this and I'm incredibly intrigued with Isabella's history and hope that she is going to actually let John in and help her through whatever this Mark situation is. Please update again soon (:
Wow. You have no idea how excited I was when I checked my e-mail and saw that you'd updated :)
Now onto the actual comment: I don't want to jump to any conclusions, but I doubt that those bruises weren't self-inflicted. Whether she wants to or not, Isabella has some explaining to do.
As always, I'll be patiently waiting to find out what you have in store.
First off, when I saw the notification for this in my email I squealed.
Second, WHAT ARE THESE BRUISES?! If they are from this Mark person, and I think they are, it's quite shocking to me, but i think it's an excellent turn in the story. I can't wait to read more.
i'm not going to make an effort right now for i've spent the half of my day on planes and in airports and i'm simply not capable of it, but i am going to take a second to say this is an absolutely amazing story and i love it.
I'm so sorry I wasn't able to comment on that last one, hun! I didn't receive the email notification, strangely enough but trust me; I definetly would have commented... I always do for every story I'm subscribed to :) but on another note: I absolutely adored this chapter! I like how John is trying to get closer to her but the walls she built around herself aren't helping him. I'm anxious to find out just how he'll manage to find a way to get to her :) awww, and I feel so bad for poor little Travis he's so 'bouncy' and happy and just a downright sweetheart! I hope things go okay between him and her :/
I really, really enjoy you're writing and don't think for one second that I don't :D update soon please! :DD <33
Thank you so much for updating =) Your writing style really is amazing, and I love the plot. It still amazes me every time I read it how good this story is.
John's her SAAAAAVIOUR x33 I love how you describe things rather than just jumping into dialogue (: It's one of the many things I love about your story ^_^
Thanks for updating =)