Fallen For You - Comments

  • aubs

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    I see that you have gotten this before, but it did sort of remind me of Romeo & Juliet.

    Just as always, your writing is beautiful! You describe everything so well it paints a picture in my mind. I did not find any mistakes within the one-shot, which is really good. I loved both Rina and Drake. Their relationship was amazingly written.

    To sum everything up, everything about this one-shot was amazing! It was a really fabulous story to read!
    July 23rd, 2010 at 10:48pm
  • lalala247

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    *claps* Great job! I like it, it was an interesting story and yet sad. but good :)
    July 12th, 2010 at 06:45pm
  • ParamOrerox12

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    Aww, sad. But also kind of sweet. A really unique idea. I liked the way you worded it, it almost made me feel like i was really hearing an angel talk. Overall, a great story.
    July 8th, 2010 at 03:53pm
  • Lady Sesshomaru

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    My God, that was really good. I have tears falling from my eyes right now. Indeed, it reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. It was such a beautiful, romantic story. You did a grand job, and I hope you win the contest! <3
    June 11th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • dragonbird306

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    Wow, this was a really good story! I loved it!
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:59am