I see that you have gotten this before, but it did sort of remind me of Romeo & Juliet.
Just as always, your writing is beautiful! You describe everything so well it paints a picture in my mind. I did not find any mistakes within the one-shot, which is really good. I loved both Rina and Drake. Their relationship was amazingly written.
To sum everything up, everything about this one-shot was amazing! It was a really fabulous story to read!
Aww, sad. But also kind of sweet. A really unique idea. I liked the way you worded it, it almost made me feel like i was really hearing an angel talk. Overall, a great story.
My God, that was really good. I have tears falling from my eyes right now. Indeed, it reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. It was such a beautiful, romantic story. You did a grand job, and I hope you win the contest! <3
Just as always, your writing is beautiful! You describe everything so well it paints a picture in my mind. I did not find any mistakes within the one-shot, which is really good. I loved both Rina and Drake. Their relationship was amazingly written.
To sum everything up, everything about this one-shot was amazing! It was a really fabulous story to read!