Guild the Lily - Comments

cutest chapter evah!
jon is beyyyonddd adorable, I live how much of a softy you've made him! it melts my heart every time (:
can't wait for moreee

i think hockey is my new favorite sport to!
i loveeee this story. i don't know how many times i'll say it!
funny thing is, like every minute i check to see if you updated again!
that's how much i love this :]
i can't wait for the next chapter!

Finally! A good Jonny T story! Yay! You're doing a great job on it so far! I cannot wait for the next one =)

Kay Jonathan is a mega hottie. I just realized & I think hockey has become my new favorite sport.
I love you writing; your 8 levels of amazing. I cant wait for the next one.

I hope you feel better boo. <3

I love this.
The whole 20-cent thing was absolutely priceless.
can't wait for more!

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this is wonderful. i love it already. :)

loveddd the update! can't wait for more.

P.S. i'm so sorry to hear that you're sick. Get well soon!

loved the new update!

loveeed it :] cutest thing everrr!
get well soon!

SO GOOD! i can't get enough of it!!
She was cold and Jonathan had a jacket.-->totally made me swoon
gah, i just love this so , so much (:

I second that. I was laughing so hard at PK.

to start, the whole pkane scene was perfect.
"Stalker as in... you hide in the Laundromat and wait for her to leave so you can sniff her panty lint or are we talking stalker as in you—"
that made me lol hardcore.
"Kiss my ass," Jonathan finally laughed, shoving Kane lightly. "At least I didn't beat up a cabbie for what was it? Twenty cents?"

Patrick froze for a moment, turning around to look at Jonathan. "Hey," he said softly. "That old man was ferocious. He growled at me."

"Are you sure that wasn't the sound of your respect going down the drain?"
that was amazing. so witty. i laughed for a good five minutes.

lol at the whole before the game thing. pkane gets his revenge<3 love pk so much.
i loved this update.
please update?!

it's good to know the swine hasn't affected your writing =]
loved it!! can't wait for the next (as usual)

OHHH!!! JONATHAN HOW CUTE!!
and her co-workers are little beezys..
they are just jealous because kara rocks and they all suckk :p
GREAT UPDATE!
and jonathan.. wow. wanna date me? :p

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cannot wait for chapter 4! your story is ah-mazing!

Well, I about DIED when I saw that banner
Um, sexy can I?
And the update was so cute(: Jon sending all those things was beyond adorable!
I can't wait for moreee

Can't wait to find out what's goona happen!

ahhhh! this was so cute.
seriously, jonathan is so precious.
this is so well written, even if you aren't used to hockey... yet!
:D :D
update tomorrow?!
<3