Omega Point - Comments

I was going to leave you a really long comment on each chapter but the WiFi I'm using is really crappy. I will tell you however that I really like the story so far. The plot, the details, the characters, everything is so well organized. I loved the detail in the first chapter the most though. I almost put in here that energized was spelled wrong but I looked at the comments above and was "Oh, nevermind. Country confusion again."

I actually had someone message if asking if I would give this story some love. Well, the story has some love now :)

LOVE THIS SO MUCH

Gah! I really love it and I didn't even read the entire first chapter. Very original. That's something special.

XD I have a thing against America so...

I have a feeling even if I lived there, I wouldn't use American spelling/grammar. In fact I know I won't.

Yeah, I myself am from Europe, I've gotten used to the grammar over here though. *sobs*

-shrugs-

Hardly.

LOL BURNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.



Bitch, plz. You love my quirky little z's.

Yeah, thank you for the compliments, but I refuse to use American spelling. Especially since I live in one of the countries that uses proper English spelling.

s.

Analysing and Realising are spelt with an a in some countries.

I've just read chapter one. I have to say this is an incredible plotline.
Completely unique, so much so that I would highly suggest discussing with your other authors
for maybe completing, editing and seeing if it would be possible to publish.

With that being said, I noticed a few errors.

Mostly in spelling. This is only the first chapter, mind you.

You've spelt realizing wrong.
As well as analyzing and overanalyzing.
You spell it with an 's' instead of a 'z', so be careful of that.

Also, She took a seat in her usual seat, it's a bit awkard having seat be used twice so I would say... "She took a seat in her usual chair..

Anywho, incredible storyline.
I'll be subscribing.

Thanks.

The plot really seems to be picking up! I is excited! Loved the new chapter!

Thanks guys! :D

I love this story! And poor Saffron and Sorcha...

Amie, I absolutely loved it. You write Saffron so well. I think you've managed to accurately portray an eleven year old girl, which is no small feat by the way. It's really quite difficult.

I'm excited to see what's coming, guys. :D :D :D

Oh man, I was checking all my subscriptions and realized how much you guys actually updated! I didn't even get notified?! WTF Mibba? Anyways, I am so glad to be reading this again! I'm very intrigued on who was in the garden with Bliss...

Great job, guys! This story is epically captivating!

SPENNEH. GET CRACKIN'.

Guize, I think we actually are working towards a plot now. :D :D :D

That was an awesome chapter, Beekins. .

Agreed, Annie. I loved it!