June 23rd, 2011 at 05:39pm
Omega Point - Comments
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LOVE THIS SO MUCHJune 22nd, 2011 at 09:52pm
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Gah! I really love it and I didn't even read the entire first chapter. Very original. That's something special.September 1st, 2010 at 02:02am
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XD I have a thing against America so...
I have a feeling even if I lived there, I wouldn't use American spelling/grammar. In fact I know I won't.April 5th, 2010 at 02:17pm -
Yeah, I myself am from Europe, I've gotten used to the grammar over here though. *sobs*April 5th, 2010 at 01:33pm
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-shrugs-
Hardly.April 4th, 2010 at 10:53am -
LOL BURNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.
Bitch, plz. You love my quirky little z's.April 4th, 2010 at 07:47am -
Yeah, thank you for the compliments, but I refuse to use American spelling. Especially since I live in one of the countries that uses proper English spelling.April 4th, 2010 at 03:04am
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s.April 4th, 2010 at 02:25am
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Analysing and Realising are spelt with an a in some countries.April 4th, 2010 at 02:24am
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I've just read chapter one. I have to say this is an incredible plotline.
Completely unique, so much so that I would highly suggest discussing with your other authors
for maybe completing, editing and seeing if it would be possible to publish.
With that being said, I noticed a few errors.
Mostly in spelling. This is only the first chapter, mind you.
You've spelt realizing wrong.
As well as analyzing and overanalyzing.
You spell it with an 's' instead of a 'z', so be careful of that.
Also, She took a seat in her usual seat, it's a bit awkard having seat be used twice so I would say... "She took a seat in her usual chair..
Anywho, incredible storyline.
I'll be subscribing.April 4th, 2010 at 01:09am -
Thanks.March 24th, 2010 at 06:19am
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The plot really seems to be picking up! I is excited! Loved the new chapter!March 24th, 2010 at 02:12am
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Thanks guys! :DMarch 19th, 2010 at 09:11pm
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I love this story! And poor Saffron and Sorcha...March 19th, 2010 at 01:43am
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Amie, I absolutely loved it. You write Saffron so well. I think you've managed to accurately portray an eleven year old girl, which is no small feat by the way. It's really quite difficult.
I'm excited to see what's coming, guys. :D :D :DMarch 18th, 2010 at 11:49pm -
Oh man, I was checking all my subscriptions and realized how much you guys actually updated! I didn't even get notified?! WTF Mibba? Anyways, I am so glad to be reading this again! I'm very intrigued on who was in the garden with Bliss...
Great job, guys! This story is epically captivating!March 12th, 2010 at 12:42am -
SPENNEH. GET CRACKIN'.
Guize, I think we actually are working towards a plot now. :D :D :DFebruary 11th, 2010 at 04:21am -
That was an awesome chapter, Beekins. .February 10th, 2010 at 09:39pm
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Agreed, Annie. I loved it!January 13th, 2010 at 06:20pm
I actually had someone message if asking if I would give this story some love. Well, the story has some love now :)