Okies, I'm reading. Your summary could do with a little tweaking, it's kinda odd. Writing about the protagonist as 'the main character' kinda breaks the suspension of disbelief you know? Use his name instead. Ooo, ouch. I was starting to really like it until you announced the word 'vampires'. It's a killer... Hope you can pull it back. Okies, you've successfully pulled it back from the vampire bombshell. Oh dear lord, Pete Wentz is Peter Pan? Escapism much? Okies, you've pulled it back again. Way to drop bombshells though. Hmm, I likey. Sure, you can put me in as a character, but can you run past me any potential mishaps first? I don't want me doing something crazy. :cute:
Whoohoo! love it! Where's peterpan though?
Your summary could do with a little tweaking, it's kinda odd.
Writing about the protagonist as 'the main character' kinda breaks the suspension of disbelief you know?
Use his name instead.
Ooo, ouch. I was starting to really like it until you announced the word 'vampires'. It's a killer...
Hope you can pull it back.
Okies, you've successfully pulled it back from the vampire bombshell.
Oh dear lord, Pete Wentz is Peter Pan? Escapism much?
Okies, you've pulled it back again. Way to drop bombshells though.
Hmm, I likey. Sure, you can put me in as a character, but can you run past me any potential mishaps first? I don't want me doing something crazy. :cute: