A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

Wow please update!!!!! Your write has always been good and it just keeps getting better :)

"Find More lyrics at www.sweetslyrics.com"
for a second i thought this was a lyric in the second song xD
anyways good job as always
update soon plz :]

OMFG I LOVE YOU SO SO MUCH!! You're continuing it. You're the best! Haha. This story rocks. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Oooh longer...good stuff must be happening. :)

No she's not. Lol.

And Kattttttttt hou have to keep this going I love it !! And naww everyone wanted sex, but what about Zacky and me?? Lol.

And I know I was so sad that I thought Papa Roach got it wrong but the Max and Joel twittered it Nd I was like no no no no cry and txted you =[ =[ =[ he sure will be missed.

haha 'the party' are you from the gold coast?

are you KIDDING ME?

you can't do that and leave it there, are you mental...TELL ME NOW....ARGH, you and your cliffhangers...it's really good, but I HATE WAITING! lolz.

gah please write more like....NOW!

ily, I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE...oops caps, oh well.

xx

well it definitely shouldn't be something bad!

awesomeness.
just listened to that song before O.o haha, and it also came on when i was reading that chap too... something freaky is going on...haha.
and woohoot...she sung...i thought she was going to chicken out....yay!
and of course i can't wait for more!

TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR TOUR WHOOP chyeah boi!
this is going to be epically awesome. :P

i loved the update and i can't wait for more.

and you know i wouldn't ever hit you intentionally, :s but i guess you're right about the leaving Melle alone... i do tend to get agressive... :s lolz...

but yeah can't wait for the next part to come out. i will try and update mine as soon as i finished writing it, then hopefully they'll come out weekly. = )

I acutally fell off the couch when I read the bit about Lya. I can see that from Imaginary-Lya-in-my-brain....

omg....UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! i can't wait to see how the tour goes...hmm i should really update mine...dammit, i wish it would update itself. haha. aww i can't wait for more....and Melle pregnant scare...wow...hmm i have no idea what i would do in that situation, but i totally agree with Kass, that she should tell Zacky, possitive or negotive...lolz.

awe, loved the update

idk where u were trying to go with this chapter
but i guess you'll explain later
update soon plz :]

not only was that sex scene hot
but it was full of love
reading it out loud kinda made me cry
god damn brian for falling asleep!
update soon plz :]

haha...loved the update, can't wait for the next part to come out. and hopefully my next part will be out too.

wonder what his dream is about

so was that a sarcastic comment
or did he really think it was a dream?
guess i'll have to wait for the next update :]

yeah well what if she thinks hes asleep
and he's really not?
lol
actually, that sounds like a good idea
never mind me
update soon plz :]

aww, can't wait for more