A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

okay first off: I LOVED IT!!

secondly, awesome update, can't wait for more.

and thirdly, it's good that you are holding off on the whole "I love you" bizo cause they only go together, even tho i can tell they love each other dearly, but you got to see if it's actual love an not lust bluring the lines. and you have done an amazing job on keeping up with the other characters that also live in this story, sometimes it can be a lot to write about 9 other characters as well as the main character, and you are doing a dandy job on that. = )

xx

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
she servived. that was my main concern, then the memory thing, and that too was safe!
yay!
awesome update and can't wait for more... =)
lovey!

at least she didn't lose her memory lol that would be bad
Finally he asked her!
Can't wait for more
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OMG!!!!
are you kidding me?!?!
seriously did not see that coming....oh man...i wonder what's going to happen... aww cry.

ooo!!if brian found out
you wrote in hurting her
in real life he'ld probably
rip you a new one xD
update soon plz :]

hopes she alright
loved the update
can't wait for more
<33

I halfway hope you don't cause the memory-forget-thing (cant remember the word) because a lot of people use it, yet it's entertaining if done correctly....

Huh, longer comments...Alright. As someone above me said, funny that they all woke up in the same room (Except Lya and Matt. Heh, go smart people!(I don't even know why that was said >.>)). Also, Brian's random need for 'help' ^^

there's not much to really comment
about on this chapter
its kinda just lyk talking to your friend
telling them how last night went
...except with way hotter guys
hav a nice 2 weeks :]

hmm i wasn't expecting them all to be in the same room bar Matt and Lya. O.o
haha but that was funny, that is so somthing i would do...haha Melle all the way... :P
and Melle cuddling Zacky does that mean they sorted out their 'fuck buddies' thing and turned it into a relationship???? i needa know...i want Zacky!!! haha....
anyway i loved the update, and i hope you have fun on your trip, that came around so fast....O.o haha but yeah i can't wait until you get back and update this...
oh poo that means i gotta wait 2 weeks.....YOU'RE TRYING TO KILL ME AREN'T YOU?!?!
hehe.
lovers you muchly missy.
xx

Lol, Brian's getting punished. As for Matt and Lya, not much, just sexy time (request, you don't have to do it if ya don't want to)

awesome...can't wait for the next one...
maybe i should update mine...haha.

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i wanna know what jam said!!!
anyways besides that note
yep i was right
even though it was pretty obvious
and who wouldn't over and over again
with such a fine man like brian
great chapter
update soon plz :]

awesome.
revenge is always best served between the sheets.
ahhh....love this story, can't wait for more.
update soonage yeah?
lovers you muchly.
xx

kay...so that was a little all over the place
but still good
i sense make up sex ;)
update soon plz :]

Can't wait for more
<33

I love it when chicks get revenge. Tis always funny ^^

Update soon? Sooo good

Yay!! Lya is in the story ^^. Cant wait to find out what happens next