Murderland Diary - Comments

Undefined;; (150)

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I really like it!! I cantwait to read more!! =)

December 2nd, 2009 at 10:33pm

Sweet_Cyanide (100)

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i think this is verry intresting. ^-^ i like it alot.

December 2nd, 2009 at 02:47am

EternalForever (100)

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Intriguing story! Can't wait to read more. =]

September 26th, 2009 at 03:29am

Peeta Mellark; (100)

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Hm...I liked it! Though, I noticed that you changed form first to third person in the second chapter. I just saw a few grammar mistakes, and punctuation issues, but it was all very little, so I'm gonna have to give this thumbs up :)

Love&Inwauh,
Sam

September 7th, 2009 at 05:24am

Parachute; (100)

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I luv it soo far!!!! Very instresting!!! Whats up with him calling her Alice and not Anya!!! So weird...cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!

September 6th, 2009 at 05:53am