Holy Shit Ray!! that was fucking amazing, the details ah it was like watching it only better!holy fuck dude. I can wait till the next update! i will read it sooner haha
LOL. I cant wait for more. But i just notce that the title "give me your heart" and his name " darren VALENTINE" and the fact that hes a "serial killer" And "loves to shed blood" and the "Heart...pumps blood"...........well forget about. i just that it was all funny how they all corresponded to the story.
crazy, fucked up story lol. But very interesting. There is something different about this one compared with other psycho killer stories, not quite sure what it is, but i love it
Oh and just wondering how you guys feel about possibly some chapter in sylvia's POV? Well I dont know how long she will be in the story, but it would be interesting to know what she is thinking and such.
Awsome chapter!!!! But u seriousily need to get rid of that backround pic it scares the shit out of me i mean everywhere i go her eyes are following me!!!!! Cant wait for more!!!!