Aww darn i wanted to steal the comment virginity Grr! lol Anywho lol. It.was.AMAZING!! for real it freakin rocked like both your chapter were freakin awsome! lol
I like this story so far. It is different than most stories on here and i was looking for something different. After a while stories start to get like each other. I can't wait to read more. :D
Oh My God!!!! That was so amazing and creppy and nasty and a litte disturbing!!!! He has a serious probelm!!!! Slyvia should stay away!!!!! I would too!!!! but im already addicted!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next update!!!!!
Oh i luv it!!!! His little obssesion or fetish...i can't find the word of what it's called but i luv it!!!!!! I was looking for something good to read...and i found your story!!!! The story ur co-authoring with your friend rite??? Well i luv it!!!!!