Ahh! That was awesome! I'm going to go out on a limb and sayyyy: That last little threat at the end was absolutely amazingly... cute! :) All protective and such. I hope you update soon! Cause I gotta know where it's going! :D
god, i hate you for writing this! xD it's so frickin' good (and i'm totally picky with stories, too) & all day in school all i could think about was "omfg did she put up chapter 7 yet?!" can't wait :p
Billie so adorable, can't wait for more now :D I like that he's figured it out, or sort of, what's going on with her. Even more that little input you had about his home life and how bad he feels about dissapointing his mother.