A Retelling of Events That Never Happened. - Comments

Woah, I'm one chapter in but I love this. It's unlike anything I've ever read. I can't even explain my thoughts on it, minus that it's stolen my heart.

you are such an incredibly talented writerl you have quite an honest style, such a beautiful one and ever time I read your work it draws me in. All of your pieces are written so lyrically and filled with emotion, it's so hard, even as a writer to put into words how unique and utterly engaging it is. It's something special and I hope you never stop writing, it's too precious.

This is so honest, and somehow this story feels more realistic than most other stories I've read.
Each chapter is beautiful (just like the rest of your writing) and I can understand it, even though in some parts it's kind of confusing.
I love this.

This is just amazing Dru.
You inspire me so much; I just want to write all night long now because if I do, I know I can live in this world of fantasy many of us build up around ourselves. I wish I had your bravery a lot of the time because to be honest with you, it fascinates me how you can be brave enough to write down your own little world for everyone else to read.

You’re one of the most talent writers on this site; don’t ever give up.

This is just amazing Dru.
You inspire me so much; I just want to write all night long now because if I do, I know I can live in this world of fantasy many of us build up around ourselves. I wish I had your bravery a lot of the time because to be honest with you, it fascinates me how you can be brave enough to write down your own little world for everyone else to read.

You’re one of the most talent writers on this site; don’t ever give up.

"Your hair is longer and you're acting like nothing happened.". Oh Ryan. Maybe it's cause of him but it's probably cause of you, I always see Ryan in personality just as you paint him. This chapter was amazing and the emotion of it is so overwhelming. I feel just as forsaken and uneasy reading it as you did feeling it.

Thanks for a last day of school pick-me-up,
Morgan

Reading what you write is painful because it's just so perfect. Your story is poetry without being the poetry I hate so much. I treasure your writing.

Agree with 'Slightly Stoopid.'
I'm just really impressed with this, that's all I can say.

'I see through your living room window and you come in through my front door.'
This line was perfect. Pure poetry, in my opinion.

'Then he’s gone and she’s as alone as she was when he was there.'
This line made me think. It brought two pictures to my mind. One was where she was imagining him, which I think was the obvious picture. But one was that it was a real relationship, and it's subtly (and beautifully, of course) implying that the relationship is destructive. And she understands that it's not the ideal situation, but needs him.

As with all your work, I loved it. (:

This left me silent and speechless. God, I have so much I could say about this in my head, but I think I'll just stick with the fact that this is my favourite thing I have ever read on mibba. I can sort of relate to it, quite a bit. It really makes me feel something, I'm not sure what it is, and I'm not sure if I've ever felt it before.
It speaks to me, I guess.
Loved it.

I cannot get over how wonderful this is.

Makes you think.

What question did he ask you when you met him??

Lovely darling. As always.

I do understand kinda understand what you mean when you say that it happened but didn't. I've felt perhaps not the same, but kinda similar about people. Well, a person, anyway. Except I knew my person. Well, you do know him, but you know what I mean.
I don't think people who write can really understand as much, because its like every tiny thought or fantasy of what could be blossoms into a story in my head and I know every chapter, every detail of all the ways we were together even though we wern't. Which made it more torturous. If that makes sense. Well, it does to me.

I can't say I understand this the same way as you, but I completely just...epiphany idk. I do the same thing with another "band person." I am so intune with him in my mind, I feel like I can predict anything and everything he does. I feel he is marinaded in my bones and I just get him completely without even knowing him.

This piece just speaks to me and I'm just overjoyed you are back in my life.

This is such a beautiful story. You’ve had my heart beat racing since chapter one and it never slowed down once. If it wasn’t so late I’d attempt to show you just how much I’ve absolutely fallen in love with this, but I really need to go to sleep so I'll leave a better comment tomorrow.

I haven't got the right words to tell you how poignant this is, probably never will find the correct ones either.

The brilliance of this is inexplicable. ♥

I have a huge addiction to fiction and wrapping myself up inside of it, so the way you wrote this struck a chord in me, big time.

I'm still trying to think about it all and settle on my thoughts. I need to comment when i'm not stoned or I'll make a fool of myself. But I'll be back.

My new story.
200th on Mibba.
A true story about things that never happened, the imagining and the reality, the truth of what did not occur.

-Dru