Watch Over My Life - Comments

This was a great story. Loved it

*sigh* I'm gonna pretend this was an April Fool's joke and ignore the last two chapters OK? They were wonderfully written and I understand why you had to do it the way you did but for the sake of my sanity I have to do it like that. Wonderful story. Absolutly wonderful. Can't wait for more on Losing Love. Thanks for sharing this amazing story with me and the rest of Mibba.

=[ She died a happy married woman!
And the end when Jay where his mom was and Jake said she was a star.
That was awesome ending. And I can't believe it's over.
Jake and Jess' love was hella strong.

You did an amazing job. Even though Jess died it was a good ending, because sometimes things don't work out for the best. Now for some constructive criticism, there are a few, very few errors, one I noticed was the word encase, in the context you use it in it should be incase. Just minor things with some easily made typos and such, but over all really well done. Keep up with your writing, I can see you going places with your writing.

This was an awesome story, i started reading as you finished it.
I was reading the last chapter and actually started crying
T'was a sad ending, but it fit with the plot :]

Oh my goodness! That was so sad and beautiful. I'm crying a little bit and I don't even know why.
This was a fantastic story and I loved every bit of it sooo much!

no...YOU ARE JUST CRUEL D: CRRUUEELLL

quickly! I'm dying here! lol

Not gonna lie, just about died when I read the beginning. It sounded like she was dead and I was about ready to come find you and kill you, tears and all. Then I realized she wasn't dead and cried harder from laughing. Amazing. Thats all I can say.

Yayyyyy!!
That was absolutely perfect! :D
Can't wait for more...
I am actually so happy now. Lol!

I loved this chapter

OMG! She's alive! and their getting married!!

I am so excited now... why did u have to tell about finishing the story?
Now I won't stop imagining how the ending will be like!! :)
I hope I cry tears of joy instead of pain at the end! lol

Amazing work as alwayss!

So, I spent a day reading this as well, I couldn't stop after stumbling across it. I almost cried when I realized it wasn't finished. This is going to be a story I want to re-read, meaning you should try to get it published! It's an amazing original!

gosh I'm going to miss this story when it's over!!!
It's seriously one of the best original stories I've read on mibba.

Wow... just... wow. I'm at loss for worss. I spent all day reading it, and it's just.... amazing. It's so original, and it actually makes sense. I give it five stars. Keep up the amazing work.

Ohmygod ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe the story is almost over!

Wow. I know I've been anxious reading your stuff before but right now, with the end so dang close, I'm going insane! Literally! I am BEYOND excited for the rest of this story. I don't know what I'll do when it's done. I'll be so sad! But I suppose I can just read Losing Love. Anywho- LOVE it and am SO excited for the rest. Great job!

Please update again!!!!! X x

Yaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!
I swear I am screaming and crying....
And my mum is looking at me like I'm a nutzo! :D
This is soooo amazing!
I can't for the rest of the story.
Amazing job.... for real!!!