Watch Over My Life - Comments

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You suck...

Gah, I literlly just broke down right now.

I just lost my grandma in October so now I'm all emotional and any story with the death of a loved one just destroys me.

But you're are such a wonderful writer and you are able to portray emotions in you characters with such ease...

I'm so jealous.

Grr... now I have to go and read another one of your stories cuz you're one of those addicting writers.

I cried during the last 2 chapters!!! This is the only story I have ever read so far to make me cry! You wrote this very well...... I really love this story. I still have tears streaming down my face... I think I actually see life differently... My great grandma died from cancer and I never really got any of it... This story kinda helped me.. Thank you soooo much for writing this story..... Thank you!

OMFG ; I can't stop crying. This is the first time I've cried like crazy ever since i broke up with my bf! OMFG yuu know what...this story changed my life...You are truly amazing. I'm gonna try to do activities that will help people with cancer...

oh yeah forgot to mention :

at least she had the baby and got married to jake in the end !!! <3

to the end of chapter 30 (2nd last chapter) tears brimmed my eyes and i started crying but then i read '6 years late...' and throughout the whole last final chapter i couldn't even read properly cause my vision was blurred by my tears and my heart is aching T__________________________________T

i love this story soo much and i can't believe she had to die... although her dying was what made it real cause if she didn't die, it's kind of "oh suuure they took away the cancer" *sarcasm*; so yeah. I'm still extremely sad about it and poor jake. i think i was crying so much for him and Jay. omg i'm going to cry some more ><

throughout this story i was always smiling or laughing or fearing the worst for what was to come, and now it's finished. it was incredible and the ending was perfect.

thank you for writing such a wonderful, inspiring story; i won't forget it :)

awesome job :'D

Why'd you have to go make me cry three times in two chapters?!?!

It was definitely one of the best stories that I've read on Mibba (: I absolutely loved it!!!

the last chapter is so cute made me cry

i loved it!
<3

I WAS CRYING!!!!!!!! :( :( :( :( how cute is Jake and Jayyyyy i love them and i love you! Keep writing awesome stories, bb! hit me up when you did!!!! xx

You made me cry lol

such a good story but I didnt want her to die =[ x

Okay I just finished the story and I Haven't been on here for a long time so that is why. And yes, I'm about to virtually murder you for having jess die. It nearly put me in tears -.- First story to almost put me in tears by the way so feel special -.-

Loved the story!!

='( Jessica did NOT have to die. . . UGH!

Amazing writer =)

Oh gosh that was so sad, but it was an amazing ending. It had me to tears, and I don't cry much for stories like this along with movies. I'm not mad about Jess dying I had a feeling it was to good to be true, it's just so sad that this actually happens to people because of cancer. This story was amazing it touched my heart haha :D

I can honestly say that this is the best story I've ever read. No joke. This was amazing. It made me laugh, CRY, be angry, and sad.
This is embarrassing but after finishing reading the last page, I was bawling. The ending was so beautiful and I'm really sad that the story is over.
I am not mad that you had Jess die by the way.
Anyways, thank you for this wonderful story and I will recommend to my friends :D
And I can't wait to read your other stories!!!

awh this is such an awesome story. loved it!! and I cried.
I didn't expect her to die, but it made the story even better. and sadder. good job!

this ending made me cry

wow those last two chapters had me in tears, i really loved the story and cant wait to see more from you!

this is a truly brilliant story. i am honoured that i've been able to read it. my brother just walked in on me crying my heart out like a psycho. you are a fantastic writer.

I'm stuck somewhere between loving you and wanting to hit you. =) It was amazing, but I'm sitting here bawling my eyes out like a weirdo in front of my laptop lol.
Regardless, it was a beautiful story with excellent writing.

I loved the story I am sad that it is over