Ahh--mazziiiing!! :) Lawl, there are a few errors, butt it's good other than tht. :) Rlly good, interesting story-board, && I'm happy it's nutt like 'twilight'. -.- :D
yum! i love it (i just subscribed.) anyway...i think that Blake will be forced to watch as Sage is raped, and that they will feed her blood to keep her alive.
i like that chappy i hope they dont get any futher with her though it would be kinda sad if they did and other than that its coming along great and i cant wait for you to update :D!