Dreams of Tomorrow - Comments

Really awesome chapter. I totally read the authors note wrong though i saw "thanks hope you liked the last chapter" I almost cried....anyways good job

that update was awsome!

That was amazing and it made me sad when she said that about going back to France in the ladt chapter, more soon please?

loved the update
awe, brian likes her!

No Athalya don't!!!!! She's distancing herself from them! Poor girl. I think it must be because they are so normal and don't really understand what she's going through. Man, I wish there was a way to make everything easier for her, but I just don't know anymore. Jimmy is trying so hard, but I just feel so bad that she rejected his help. I think it kind of broke Jimmy's heart....

Okay so I'm absolutely certain that it's a Brian story, but will Jimmy also develop romantic feeling for her too? I hope so, I just adore the Jimmy you created!! More than anything I like that you made Athalya headstrong and independednt able to speak and take care of herself. What I'm confused about is that wouldn't Brian or Athalya have noticed that they're neighbors after spending a week hanging out? She even went to his house and he to hers....

Johnny is so cute! I like how she's so protective of him. her sense of justice is righteous. I hate how they pick on him too... in real life that is...I can't believe they actually beat him ap when he first joined the band! Assholes....

I love that you made her deal with the problem so realistically. It makes it all the more sad... She's got skills! I remember when I learned the Thriller moves for a theatre show. Gosh, those were hard! And evem better now Brian can watch her from his window... I definitely wouldn't mind that. Although it reminds me of one very creepy song by Clay Aiken (i'm not sure if that's how it's spelled) *shudders* he just repulses me. Aiken, not Brian. ^.^

Anyways, I can completely relate to the part where she's trying to drown out her thoughts and the world by blasting music and dancing. I use that as a way to just forget and relax for a while.

I wonder what jimmy talked to Brian about. I know it was something related to GD, but I'm not sure. Probably telling him about the picture under Athalya's pillow...I really feel bad for her grandparents. They're trying the best that they can, but seeing her so depressed all the time must be really painful for them...

And AAAWWW! She smiled sincerely at Brian, I think my heart skipped a beat too. I didn't know that she had been faking that much, so that true show of emotion was really significant;. Loving Brian....

I loved it! From the outburst, which was so amazing because I totally did not expect it, although I should have, to the dancing and Brian watching! Amazing, as always, my dear!

(Haha, I just noticed that in my last comment I wrote Adeline, instead of Athalya, probably because I'm so used to seeing your name in your stories....*shifts in embarrassement*) Excuse my spelling mistakes, I think I've lost my ability to type today....

Aww, he can see her from his bedroom HOW AWESOME! (:
I love how much of Brianess was in this chapter ^^
Poor Johnny, gotta love that cute little guy <3
I hope she'll get used to America soon. I think if she went to a Green Day show with the guys she might never want go back to French ;)

..anyway, loved this chapter as always, hope you get to update soon ... and as I finish writing this comment Minority by Green...well I don't need to write their name to you lol, came on shuffle! ^^

ah oui, et pour info, j'ai pris un café... c'est pour ca que je suis du genre super excitée et que je dis un peu tout ce qui me passe par la tete :p :p :p
Youyouu !! pour une fois qu'un café va ptetre m'empecher de dormir !!! faut que je bosse, aussi, tu crois pas?? Ba si l'effet du café dure assez longtemps, on vera ;)
euuuh j'aime trop mibba u_u tu sais que ce matin j'ai rangé ma chambre et j'ai trouvé un lettre que tu m'as écrite qd t'étais a la commo et moi aux states, et que tu disais que t'avais pu d'inspiration pr mibba et que t'avais déjà effacé plusieurs histoires?.. ca m'a fait TROP bizzare, parce qu'apres j'ai repensé a DoT et a la série Wreckage... Jsuis fiere que tu sois revenue sur mibba :p
jme la ferme?... okay...
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CAFE !!!!

awww =D j'aiiime !! toujours la discution de Brian et d'Athalya !! et j'étais encore mdr en relisant le "you can laugh, now"' xD et puis encore le coup de Johnny qui sort qu'il dira qu'il connait une fille qui mange des cuisses de grenouille, des escargots et des pigeons :p surtout que t'en manges pas, toi xD Moi j'ai fait deux sur trois (j'ai pas encore testé le pigeon) et je dois dire que jsuis fiere d'etre francaise pour bouffer des trucs comme ça :p lol ^^
et dsl pour le coup de la phrase de Jimmy que j'avais pas comprise et que je t'ai embrouillé sur msn avec "I I I = Jimmy" xD !!!
et j'ai écouté Smooth Criminal pour me mettre dans l'ambiance :p et trop bien la fin qu'elle se rend meme pas compte que Bri la regarde... Et jsuis trop contente d'avoir compris la nuance sur Green Day !! que ya que moi qui comprend xD lol ^^
Love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu (love is all you need... dsl, flashback Beatles :p)

ur welcome i love the story. and i love her personality!!

Great update!
And Brian gets to be a creeper! Haha. Sorry, it reminded me of how I've made Lana a creeper in my story and I laughed for a little bit. But anyways, I loved the update and I'm looking foward to more!

this is an awesome story
i like the french vibe in it
its very
je ne sais pas. lol
i know french too lol. im pretty flent with it if i say so myself

Wow! I LOVE this story. It's so sweet!, I can't stop smiling while I'm reading it! Oh, and your English is great by the way, I wouldn't have known it wasn't your native tounge if you hadn't said so :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Aw, man, when I got your message earlier, I was like, "crap!" I had typed a pretty long comment, but oh well, I'll just write a new one!

Adeline must be feeling so out of this world right now! I mean, spending her birthday with Billie....wow, just wow....And he was so sweet! Too bad he's certain that he's not her father. I was thinking that because both have green eyes and all....Maybe he has a brother that her mom slept with...? >.<

I love Jimmy, plain and simple. This story makes my undying love for the guy even stronger! He is just so sweet! I just realized something....This'll be a Brian story, right? Haha, I hope I caught that, because when he was looking at her...I just thought that maybe..?? Hm, but then again, I want Jimmy to like her too because he's just such a sweet guy. Oh I don't know who I want her to end up with, or if you're planning for her to end up with anyone. Loving the suspense!

Zacky and Justin, I just think that they're still feeliing uncomfortable about being assholes to her in the beginning. Maybe over time if she livens up they'll be able to see that they're completely forgiven and try to get closer to her again.

Her stepfather seems kind of distant, I mean he probably loves her and everything, but I think that maybe he knows something. Just the way he talked to her over the phone semed sort of not how i imagined it...or maybe I'm reading way too much into it?

Those presents were awesome. Val and Michelle are so nice, although Matt is really not much a main supporting character... I loved the flag thing, so cute. I ca totally see then giving that to somebody. XD Johnny too, he's a swetheart. Such a cute little boy! =D

I loved it and I can't wait for the next one! This comment is seriously not as good as the one I wrote the first time, but I think it covered all the main points. It was late last night, so I forgot most of what I wrote. ^.^'

Loved it! Aww sounds like a fucking amazing birthdayyy. The guys are amazing and Jimmy's amazinger <3 Jimmy Jimmy Jimmy <3 He's so cute and sweet and...I'll shut up XD
Anyway great update, loved it!!! ^^
Hope you get to update again next weekend (:
And Billie's amazing too and lol at Brian and Johnny's so tiny and........two Davids and the nickname Frenchie so makes me think of Simple Plan. XD
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I aboslutely love this story
Jimmy is amazing, so loving
Johnny is a sweetheart
Love Brian and Zacky.. now
Still dont like Justin lol
Cannot wait for an update

Loved the chapter.
Lol brian and his purple... <3
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxox

Awesome update! The girl had a pretty good birthday. Haha. Well, I'm glad you got a chance to update and I'm looking forward to the next one!

lol, loved it

vraiment, je vois pas ou est le probleme avec ce chapitre xD il est génial, ya du BJ, ya des Grands parents, ya du Jimmy, ya du Justin, ya du Brian.... YA DE TOUT ET C'EST GENIAL !!!
et puis Athalya les envois pas chier qd ils lui offrent des cadeaux :D et j'ai trouvé que tu t'es très bien débrouillée pr expliquer le coup des drapeaux et du mur :) et je vois pas du tout ou est le probleme avec ce chapitre .... pourquoi tu l'aimais pas? :/ moi j'adore xD
et puis le ptit intermede en A/N pr parler de fighting... "NOUS essayons d'updater plus souvent..." GENRE NOUS, c'est plutot TOI tu veux dire x) et puis t'as vu, ya des gens que je connaissais pas qui ont commentés xD lol... apres ca se trouve ils commentent tout le temps mais jm'en souviens pas n_n tant pis, comme ca j'ai l'impression qu'y a PLEIN de gens qui aiment :p
you you jsuis completement crevée par contre xD I'm off to bed !!!!
<3 !!!!

I loved the update! Im so glad that shes finally starting to accept that everyone is her friend. I love the wake up call from Jimmy and Johnny too. Thatd definitely be an awesome way to wake up! LOL Cant wait for more. Update soon!