Ohmygoodness. I envy your writing... You guys are fabulous writers, this story is so amazing :) Honestly its too good for words. Continue!! Please?? <33
OHMIGOD. YOU'RE BACK. -Freaks Out- Allyssaaaaaaa, you didn't TELL ME that Amanda's back. >.< But okay. I don't mind. You know, I was going to unsubscribe from this, but.........Nnnnneeeeeverrrrmind. Sheesh, I'm glad I didn't either. Anyways. I wanna hear Avery's storyyy, update soon?<3 xo
As if enough people haven't said it- I really, really love this story! After only 3 chapters I've fallen in love with with. KUDOS! Can't wait for more.
There wasn't anything wrong with this chapter at all. It was well written; it was very descriptive. I like how there are certain styles used to show a character changing/cutting off a thought. Don't be sorry for anything you write. It's actually quite good.
I envy your writing...
You guys are fabulous writers, this story is so amazing :)
Honestly its too good for words. Continue!! Please?? <33