Loved the way you wrote this prologue. Its sortof poetic and gives good insight on the situation and Avery's mind. Will enjoy hearing Skyler's veiw on things.
Mmmm ^_^ I must say I'm liking this ;D I love how it's so emotional and deep and I just can't wait to see where you go with it, I can tell it's going to be very brilliant :tehe:. It's beautiful really, it truly is. No need for nervousness, you're getting a great response already it seems xD I've subscribed and I'l eagerly await chapters. ^_^
I like this a lot so far, just like nearly every one of your other stories. I'm definitely subscribing! I hope there's an update soon! I'm really glad that sadly.sadistic recommended this to me, Thanks! =]<3
Wow, this is amazing. There is so much emotion in it. I'm extremely curious about what is going to happen, about what did happen. It's different from any other story I have read, which is always a good thing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll subscribe. Amazing job.