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  • shannonymous.

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    This is cutecutecute. (:
    September 25th, 2009 at 01:03am
  • The First Snow

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    wow i love it can't wait for more
    September 25th, 2009 at 12:46am
  • TodayxIsxThexDay

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    Keep up the updates lovelies. I like how this is going. :)
    September 25th, 2009 at 12:15am
  • Kiah Melon

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    Holy SHIT.
    You have alot of comments, 96? xD
    I love this !
    sooooo much,
    I can relate as well.
    cant wait for the next update =]
    September 25th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • A Rocket To The Moon

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    Wtf? how could Gavin do something so mean to cute adorable Avery?? :( hes so cute xD *hugs Avery*
    and Skylar loves Avery alot,i can tell ^_^
    loved it,more soon peoples xoxo
    September 24th, 2009 at 10:30pm
  • pixiedust26

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    i gotta say both chapters were so amazing and i can't wiat for more i loved it and i can tell i'll become addictied to this fic
    September 24th, 2009 at 08:35pm
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    Awhhhh.
    Poor Avery.
    :[
    At least he has Skyler there for him, though, yeah?
    (:
    xx
    September 24th, 2009 at 07:50pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Omg, that was cute. ^ ^ Mos def update soon. :]
    September 24th, 2009 at 07:29pm
  • AngelOfBlood

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    oooooo He so wise. 'no, no you thought you did' More likely than not he's right ^_^
    Nice first chapter! does this count as the first chapter? I'm gonna say yes as the one before was a prologue :P
    September 24th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    I love Skyler. He's one of my favorites I can tell. I LOVE this. Can you please please please please update more? I would beg if I have to...

    xoxo,
    December
    September 24th, 2009 at 12:28pm
  • go.effin.nuts

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    mmm i happen to find this to be amazing..and nicely written...especially the first chapter. It was beautifully written and slightly poetic in a way....i can see myself falling in love with this *subscribes* can't wait for more.

    xTanei
    September 24th, 2009 at 11:44am
  • xx..KiNg'S_vOiD..xx

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    I really like it!! Thanks for giving me the link sadly.sadistic! It sounds like its gonna be really good!! xD *subscribes*
    Keep going!!
    xx
    Chaos
    September 24th, 2009 at 09:22am
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    holy crap a lot of people have commented since i last came online...
    well done!! :-D
    great chapter, i cant wait for more!
    September 24th, 2009 at 08:53am
  • november rain;

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    D: Did that previous comment sound mean? :( I'm sorreh. DX

    Well guys, I only thank new readers personally, so you don't have to put up with any more of my profile-comment spam anymore. xD

    I'll try to update soon... :S But falling.frankie's standard is just too good for me. x3
    September 24th, 2009 at 08:46am
  • november rain;

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    Good-Girls-Go-Bad:
    Okay this is wicked.
    Oh and one thing, the names Skyler and Avery, their the same names Twoonie uses in her story Mysophobia. Just a heads up, and no one will probably realise its just cause im so obbsessed with her stories. XD
    Mysophobia is actully a joint fic but i forgot the other authors name, sorry.

    Xx---Phoebe
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    Angelus.:
    Uh, I'll edit this when I've read it, but I read the summary, and I just thought you should know there's another original slash called The Harsh Truth, with the two main characters called Averi and Skyler..
    It's still going, and it's pretty popular.

    But yeap, good first chapter - maybe make it a little longer? :arms:
    It's actually just a prologue, hence the shortness.
    And we picked the names before realizing that they were the main characters in that story and another one by ChemicalTwoon. We didn't do it purposely, promise. :tehe:
    Like she said, falling.frankie and I are both well aware of "The Harsh Truth"'s same character name thing. We're also aware that our title is very similar to "I Will Try To Fix You". Both (and ours) are original slashes.

    Thing is, we only noticed right after we posted it up, so... I hope the authors of those stories don't mind. >3

    And I meant to make the prologue short. It's more like a sneak preview kind of thing, rather than jumping straight into the story. x]
    September 24th, 2009 at 08:30am
  • TheGreatSaiyaman

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    Brilliant. I like that yall portrayed much emotion into the chapters. Great job you two Clap
    September 24th, 2009 at 07:26am
  • faithleilani

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    i really love it
    cant wait for moreDance
    September 24th, 2009 at 06:05am
  • hello hollywood

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    The advertising past was funny :p Still love the story and waiting for updates :}
    September 24th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • Tattoo

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    Awww.
    Poor Avery =[
    I feel bad for Skyler too though, cause its obvious that he really cares for Avery in a "more than best friends" type way.
    Thanks so much for updating!
    Hopefully Skyler will be able to put Avery's heart back together =]
    September 24th, 2009 at 05:33am
  • november rain;

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    OHMYGOD.
    My heart literally skipped a beat when I saw EIGHTY COMMENTS?!?
    And not to mention the 9 STARS ON 2 CHAPTERS?!?!?
    When I left it, it was about 32 comments, 5 stars, 1 chapter. >.<

    Thank you guys SO much! I'll go thank all of you on your profiles later personally. ^.^ But right now I'm rushing... I've got class now and my teacher's waiting! DX

    MANDERS THAT WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER! I would totally say update soon, but it looks like that's my job this time... ._.
    September 24th, 2009 at 05:27am
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