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  • visualprince

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    New reader!
    I just read the first few chaps and so far, this is an awesome story

    Keep updating!
    December 14th, 2009 at 04:35pm
  • Jaf19

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    *_* the suspense is killing me, great, oh and I remind you to change status.
    November 6th, 2009 at 07:35am
  • Jaf19

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    AWESOME update, and I understand about the exams I too am having update issues. The chapter was great as always keep it up, please.
    November 2nd, 2009 at 09:51pm
  • Jaf19

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    The story is worth the read, although the author had small grammar mistakes, the story as a whole really has zest. She definately has creativity, so much that I am now an addict, and will subscribe to refraction of wings right away. Please, update soon. What was really neat, was the drawing, it looked like someone the author knew drew it. Did they? What was noticed about Monsters Embrace, my story, is that the chapters are long and have little action, or little the reader could look forward to. Also, the prologue really helps in adding interest to the author's story. 8 out of 10 stars, and if not for the grammar mistakes the stars would be 9, out of 10.

    Thank you for allowing me to read this story. Please, once again update soon. What is the rate of updates?
    October 14th, 2009 at 11:51pm
  • TinklingOfThePiano

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    Hahah, it's all right, the fact that I had a few subscribers is quite enough for me. =D
    September 22nd, 2009 at 01:16pm
  • quinn in wonderland?

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    Oh. I can wait for that xD And trust me, your story is the shizz, I'm surprised more people don't like it. I'm awaiting the next update!
    September 22nd, 2009 at 04:13am
  • TinklingOfThePiano

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    Oh my oh my, I really just can't believe people would actually like my story.

    I can't spoil everything for you all now can I? Be patient.

    There will be at least like one update a week. So, no worries. =)
    September 20th, 2009 at 05:22pm
  • quinn in wonderland?

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    Ah! This is fantastic! You've created a scary little world for your characters. I like that, usually the stories I've read about super powers are all about running around fighting crime rather than fending for their lives. Kudos ^^ And I'm with xiluvmusicx, what's going to happen!? Hahaha.
    September 20th, 2009 at 04:32pm
  • TinklingOfThePiano

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    xiluvmusicx:
    Ok, I'll bite. What happens next(aka, DON'T LEAVE ME IN SUSPENCE!!!)
    Hahaha. I'll try to update as much as I can. But sometimes now and on writer's block strikes me so you know. =)
    September 20th, 2009 at 03:23pm
  • xiluvmusicx

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    Ok, I'll bite. What happens next(aka, DON'T LEAVE ME IN SUSPENCE!!!)
    September 20th, 2009 at 05:43am
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