November 3rd, 2009 at 11:24pm
F.M.L, I had to write this entire thing again... -__- I knew I should have copied it -__- *cries*
(Kind of long comment coming you way)
Okay, I am finally reading (on a second tab) this story :D Because I am absolutely sure, well 80% sure I haven't read from chapter 4 till the eight, which I've noticed is the ending... I will comment on all of them right now. Beginning with of course...
Chapter 4: That muffin must have been the size of Matt’s hand, and that is huge!
Don't talk about his hands, talk about his nose... (If I ever get the chance to meet him, I will tease Matt about it and I'ma poke it. Although his nose is not pokable, but Brian's, now he has a pokable nose... I notice noses, how pathetic is that?)
we heard what sounded like someone throwing up. We broke apart and found Jimmy and Zacky behind us making gagging noises.
I laughed there...
“Hello…Hello…oh yeah, I am not here right now, but if you leave me a message, I just might get back to you…who am I kidding, if I don’t know you, then don’t be calling me! But, if I do know you…beware!”
I love that
“God, I love that horse cock.”
My favorite Brian quote! I have it written on my converse and will continue doing so, with all the new ones I buy
(I wrote more in the other one -_- stupid internet)
Excellent chapter, Seize the Day has my second favorite Guitar solo, the first goes to Afterlife.
Chapter 5: Zacky said,
“she is the one who can not only hang with us, but helps keep us straight”
Hilarious, had to be Zacky...
I was frozen in my seat before all the boys jumped out of their seats and hugged me and then Matt planted a huge passionate kiss on my lips before walking up to the stage.
That had me going "awww"
Chapter 6: and they all added an extra pop to our “p”.
I love popping the P
I dropped to the floor and popped back up thrusting my ass back into his now extremely hard cock, running my hand through the back of my hair. Then turned to face him only to dip back down and mouth the next few lines.
It's hard for me to imagine her doing that... I just remember of the prequel... and I just... can't.
Then I shook my ass and proceded to grind up against Matt and I could feel him get, if at all possible, even harder. I also swear I heard him groan.
Same as above
“Baby… holy shit. Are you trying to kill me?”
I laughed out loud :D
Matt looked at me with his eyes full of lust when I decided to let him see my La Perla panties. I told him that if he was a good boy and got us home, he could see more of that.
Can't imagine that... where's the innocent Ashlyn?
Then, I lightly raked my teeth up and down his cock then, he came so hard, but, since I am a nice wife, I drank every last drop of his yummy cum.
Dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She swallowed...
lady bits
Long time without hearing that
Chapter 7: I am so nervous. I have something very important to tell Matt and I don’t know how I am going to tell him.
By telling him of course :D
*make sure Matt is dressed
Wow... lol nice one :D I love this one.
I love what Matt got as a present... well, early present. "My dad's tattoos rock"
Excellent chapters!
Chapter 8: Matt's Point Of View!
I like how possessive he is. Val is so lucky, well Ash in this story :D
“Hark, who goes there?”
“It is I, the fair Ashlyn, coming to seek my husband, Matthew.”
“Enter… if you dare!”
I still love that part!
“Handsome? I think this is pretty sexy, if I do say so myself.”
Another great line delivered by Matt! <3
And, well the rest after she walked into the party, I read through it a bit fast, because, I REALLY can't imagine her like that. O.O' I don't know why.
Excellent story :D
:D I won against the internet!