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  • Pie.

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    Hey this story is good! Are you still writing it? Or have you stopped?
    I'd love it if you carried on XD
    March 25th, 2008 at 06:02pm
  • LGFUAD_JJ

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    "Art is about throwing together misunderstanding, rage, passion, anarchy, judgement, intelligence, chaos together. It is about bringing together every emotion you've ever felt and making something that helps you to understand those emotions better. Art," and now he sneered at Stupid, Stupid Boy, "is not decorative material. It is your understanding of the anagogic universe."

    I loved how you described that.
    Art.
    Jeeze, I can hardly describe a bad dream compared to a subject.
    Keep writing this.
    I actually enjoy this much more then a fanfic.
    :].

    LGFUAD, JJ<3
    October 15th, 2007 at 10:43am
  • Spaztastic

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    Amazing as usual.
    Reading this is like reading a book. I like how this all revolves around art, and you make Dante talk about it in an interesting way.
    xD
    September 23rd, 2007 at 08:18am
  • HiddenInShadows

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    This is amazing!
    As always! Lol

    Sorry I haven't read more on your other stories, I've been really busy. I'm getting to it though!!
    September 21st, 2007 at 04:11am
  • Biankis!

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    fuuuck this is amazing

    its a very interesting plot and cant wait to read the rest of it

    such interesting characters ^.^ how do u come up with this youve got talent
    September 20th, 2007 at 09:47am
  • DontFallDownStairs

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    Just one word... wow
    You've sustained your level of excellence once again
    I think I understand the plot and characters a bit more now
    September 19th, 2007 at 12:10am
  • Spaztastic

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    Sorry it took me longer to comment. I had to vacuum. But yes, review.
    I really liked how you began to whole story – with the desire. You nailed that down perfectly. The details you went into were just so well written I don’t know what to say! Everything you wrote was true, too. All of those things people desire.

    In the second chapter I liked how you described Dante. In most stories, or at least the ones I’ve tried to read, they always make the guy quiet, not wanting to talk...you know all that stuff that has gotten pretty mainstream around here. Even when you said Dante wasn’t perfect, you told how he wasn’t perfect in a way I haven’t seen others do before. It gave me a good feeling that this story will be very good.

    "Art is about throwing together misunderstanding, rage, passion, anarchy, judgement, intelligence, chaos together. It is about bringing together every emotion you've ever felt and making something that helps you to understand those emotions better. Art," and now he sneered at Stupid, Stupid Boy, "is not decorative material. It is your understanding of the anagogic universe."

    ^ When I read those sentences I felt like I was reading something from…I don’t know, some really famous author. It’s a very good part in that chapter.

    I don't see why more people aren't reading this. It's really good. I saw you Pimp it on the Pimpin' and Reccin' thread 'cause it deserves to have more readers!
    I'm definitely subscribing.
    September 18th, 2007 at 06:07am
  • spazz fa-reak

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    your like.. fucken wise. as anything. <3
    September 16th, 2007 at 10:19am
  • DontFallDownStairs

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    You are one of the best people at writing introductions.
    They are so... emotional.
    You seem to find a word and just play with it.
    Let me just say... it really works.

    Abi
    September 14th, 2007 at 03:37am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    It was a readlly good start, but I really just read mostly fan fics....
    September 12th, 2007 at 07:55am
  • explosive light

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    wow.
    just fucking amazing.
    :D
    September 8th, 2007 at 11:20am
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