You Hold The Power To Set Me Free - Comments

ok! i will work on it :)

Please start updating again!

i like the story very muchly, pwease continue *insert begging face here* :)

I really like this story i cant wait to see what happens between her and Zacky .. and whether or not anything more happens with the rest of the boys. I am usually a silent reader which i'm sure authors hate lol but i really would hate to be updateless!

awww, that made me tear up....more soon? lolz 8P

I LOVE this story.
Please please please update soon?!?!?!?!?!

OoOoo i LIKE this story its different. More!!

i don't have spellcheck.. and thats how i think i think you spell it.. so thats how it is.. :)

I pulled on the rest of the ridiculas get up and Zacky opened the door. Mat was outside the door rubbing himself through his pants.
*ridiculous

Zacky and Mat followed behind me. I walked into the living room and stood awkwardly in the middle of the room.
Second paragraph in the middle.
*Matt

The tub was really nice, it was one of those jeccuzi type ones with the jets. He poured some shampoo into the tub to make bubbles.
About 8th paragraph.
*jacuzzi

I think you should review your chapters more carefully.
But wow, Matt is an asshole...

Ahhh....she pleases the Syn :P
So, Zack is a-fucking-DORABLE.
Uhm, yea.
Hey, do you think you're gonna post a picture of her?
OH!
And, I just thought I should tell you, the layout pretty difficult to read...cause the white writing keeps overlapping the white in the picture and such...so yea.

jeez..this story is both phycotic and amazing....I LOVE IT! update toon!!

Oh, wow, I love this!
I seriously cannot wait until you update.
It was so unpredictable when they turned out to be in a type of gang.

And sorry for taking forever to read it.
I have been sick so it's been hard to concentrate on stories.
I'm off to read your other stories now. ^^

please update soon! love the update!

amazinggggggg! update it soon :3

i loove this story!
waiting for the newxt chapterrr!

can't wait for the next chapter,update soon!!!!!!

hmmm still a bit confused at to what is going on. but i'm guessing as time goes by i'll find out. still kinda creepy that she's his gf when she was forced there. yikes.

i like it so far. anxious to see what's going to happen. obviously it's no party haha.