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  • music is life

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    RAWR! I happen to like France and the French language!

    Bonsoir, mon cheri! Comment-alley vous? Oui, tres bien, merci!

    but, whatever. great update! i won't mind it being a 100-chapter story! I'm reading a story more then 400 chapters long (that's still not finished) so, really, i won't mind.
    January 22nd, 2008 at 06:07am
  • Superhero.

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    Ratt a tat tat.

    I take it 'Carpet' and the other girl are people you know.
    :)

    More soon?
    January 21st, 2008 at 08:33pm
  • Bellkura

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    Chapter 33
    I'm sure James loves Alec as much as would deserve a goodbye of Titanic proportions, but I don't think, being a guy, he'd stick around for the five minutes it'd take.

    OOOoooh, they're staying at the Intercontinental. No, wait, the weird one by the library. (I think I know too much about the hotels around Wellington...)
    Critical, I think some of those teenagers WERE the goths and emos. Just... not directly mentioned.

    I am intrigued by this mention of not even covering half of the story you want to. I do hope you'll suddenly bring up something from the past or do something crazy. Because, much as I love this Wellington chapter, it is a bit slow ^__^;;;;
    January 21st, 2008 at 12:38pm
  • Critical_Lemon

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    Hahaha, no mention of the goths or emos though... for the un-Wellingtoned they sit there ALL day, being boring. Good update though, I get the feeling that you could write 50 chapters set in Wellington Dubdub.
    January 21st, 2008 at 08:55am
  • music is life

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    oh my God... i love how Alec has James wrapped around her finger... in a GOOD way, not that weirdo bitch way.

    I could totally see Frank scolding them. haha, try to score some lavander soap, that shit taste fucking NASTEY!

    anyway, keep updating! merci beaucoup, cheri! Au Revoir pour... now.
    January 20th, 2008 at 11:47pm
  • Critical_Lemon

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    “Wanna bet?”
    “No.”
    I laughed and patted him on the head.
    “Good boy."

    No imagination, you're just taking more and more things from of your own life :P

    The goodbye was funny, such drama queens.
    January 20th, 2008 at 10:11pm
  • Superhero.

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    Aww.
    i'm going to cry.

    Goodbye... my love...
    (Not really :))
    January 20th, 2008 at 10:51am
  • Bellkura

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    *giggles* I have no idea what they're talking about but it's funny.
    You should do a journal entry about the being an old lady and your grandchildren groaning about visiting you. (Probably because you'd be talking about weird things like Bleachathons and so on)
    January 13th, 2008 at 07:20am
  • DeathBat Tori

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    hey loving the story, hope you will update soon and i loved the mcr quiz lol fun

    much love
    vicky
    xoxo
    January 11th, 2008 at 10:57am
  • Superhero.

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    When you repeat back
    So many times
    It's as if your
    LearningLines, LearningLines, LearningLines


    :D
    Sorry. I just had to put it :)

    Actually... I couldn't think of some of the quotes :)
    But of course I knew the last one :)
    December 31st, 2007 at 07:19pm
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    GAH!!!

    I couldn't remember our conversation! I was thinking "Now do i make a reference and risk stuffing it up or just leave it...?"

    And I screwed it.

    But I'm not going to change it, because I would have to rewrite the whole chapter and I can't be stuffed.

    But you're probably going to DONK me on the head next time i see you.

    OH WELL, sorry people. I don't listen properly.
    December 30th, 2007 at 12:39pm
  • Bellkura

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    I am on chapter 30
    *groans* You got the floors the wrong way around.

    And I'll say this again, Dani's adorable.
    December 27th, 2007 at 07:42am
  • Superhero.

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    HAHAHA You put in my line (:

    More before you go away please?

    Merry Christmas!
    December 22nd, 2007 at 04:48pm
  • Critical_Lemon

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    Here you go darling, 60th comment.

    I really like how the story is going, change of location! I wonder where they shall go in NZ......

    Please another chapter before you go away!
    December 22nd, 2007 at 02:39pm
  • Superhero.

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    Hahaha!
    She fell down the stairs!

    I'M SO EXCITED!
    HAHAHA
    I'm such a retard (:

    More soon?
    December 20th, 2007 at 03:42am
  • Bellkura

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    Lol, they should've been confused as to which floor was fourth. Or at least made some kind of comment on how the numbering is all wrong.
    But Dani's question about things being made out of stone reminds me of a quote from a Gaiman. How all the buildings in America are called old if they're only fifty or so years old, where in England they're old if they're 150 years old.

    I melted at the end. And Dani's so cute.
    December 19th, 2007 at 04:21pm
  • Superhero.

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    AHH MY GOD!
    I'M SO EXCITED!
    :)

    How cute.
    James is scared of air-o-planes.
    :D
    December 19th, 2007 at 12:34am
  • Bellkura

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    on chapter 28
    Hehehe, New Zealand. Just as long as you don't dump a character you never want to see again there, that mention is perfectly fine with me.

    *shakes head at the hyperbole*
    December 18th, 2007 at 03:08pm
  • Bellkura

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    I am on chapter 27, I need to remind myself of this

    Hmmm... interesting chapter. If this were an anime or manga, there's something connect Alec and Alec together, and not just there name or birthday. Something mysterious~
    December 11th, 2007 at 01:07pm
  • Bellkura

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    23 is still so sweet... *awws*
    I need to make a note of which chapter I've read latest though...
    Matt is INDEED very... exuberant. Very cute and dorkish. I like him.

    Aww... reminiscining... *then laughs over the affectionate name calling* and more reminiscing.
    It's also not fair you get... wait, not more weeks than I, I just choose to punish myself.
    December 11th, 2007 at 01:03pm