I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

  • lynne1988

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    Just as he got shoved into the hall, a still shaving-cream-covered Patrick Sharp came tearing at him, letting out a war-like cry as he lunged himself at Adam. The Wisconsin native let out a girlish scream as they hit the floor.

    1. Patrick Sharp's war cry is HOT.
    2. GIRLISH SCREAM FROM BURISH. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

    And okay. Could Phoebe and Niklas' reunion have been ANY MORE ADORABLE??? I fucking squealed, Alyssa. I SQUEELED.

    *sigh* I'm glad this chapter had NO MICHAEL.

    But I know that's not going to last. =(
    October 27th, 2009 at 06:13am
  • gurlygirl87

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    Love love love this story!!!!!!!!
    October 27th, 2009 at 06:04am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    LOVE the double updates!!!!
    October 27th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • mully17

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    Awww Nik and Pheobe!!! And Eveyln and Ben are adorable
    October 27th, 2009 at 04:53am
  • thisafterlife

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    ;D you know you love it when we harass you to update!

    the adam/sharpie part was PERFECTION, oh my god! my poor baby, getting attacked by a rabid patrick sharp.

    ben is SO adorable *dreamy sigh* more plz <3
    October 27th, 2009 at 04:50am
  • Ltsghwks

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    I knew Michael was no good, especially compared to Ben. I can't wait to read what happens next.

    Also, I love the new picture.
    October 27th, 2009 at 04:37am
  • broken sticks

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    We all know what happened the last time a boy started flirting with/hitting on Evelyn. Ben needed to be restrained. But knowing you, you're going to add some crazy drama because that's how you roll.

    Don’t be a pussy, she texted back, adding I love you! at the end. For some reason this made me laugh. For some reason I can see that being done. Very lovely.

    Michael is what I like to call a shit disturber. There are some good shit disturbers and some bad ones. He is a bad one because he has bad intentions. In some ways it would be good for Ben to find out because he'd do something and Michael would know to back off. On the other hand it would be bad because no one likes a jealous dude who has to kick the asses of all guys who look at his girl.

    And once again I am leaving you a rambling comment. And why am I leaving you a rambling comment? Because I am going to work on Ovie now. Write some Ovie and continue to eat my chocolate chip Teddy Grahams because I am cool like that.

    Awesome update! More soon m'dear! <3
    October 27th, 2009 at 03:00am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    LOVE the new picture and i knew that micheal character was fishy!!
    October 26th, 2009 at 11:20pm
  • Rylie_

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    Micheal better step the hell away. She already has a man that can beat his ass! Don't think he won't.

    Anywho, good job! Update soon!
    October 26th, 2009 at 10:21pm
  • Jessica;

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    Okay, Michael, down boy.
    She's taken.
    How awkward...for reals.
    For Michael's sake I hope Ben doesn't find out how he feels about her cause he could snap him like a twig!
    More soon. <3
    October 26th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • rockstaar.

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    Whoaaaa there, Michael. Keep it in your pants, please.
    Evelyn has Ben. And Ben is hot. And plays hockey. You lose.
    Oh how I love this story...
    (BTW, i'm going to make it known that when I went into call Nik, we were having mad phone sex.)
    :D
    ps, WE'RE GOING ON A ROAD TRIP?!
    love it.
    October 26th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • kare_bear

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    *cough*
    October 26th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • kare_bear

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    a lot a lot.
    October 26th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • kare_bear

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    because i love it a lot.
    October 26th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • kare_bear

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    so i've noticed you got 8 comments since you updated.
    this making it the 9th. have i mentioned how much i love this story?
    October 26th, 2009 at 09:16pm
  • thisafterlife

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    loved ittt <3
    October 26th, 2009 at 08:41pm
  • snowboarder79

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    I knew that Michael guy would stir shit up ! If he's smart, he will leave Evelyn alone...cause I definitely wouldn't piss Ben Eager off haha.
    Anyways, great update. More soon please <3
    October 26th, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • lynne1988

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    “Oh, just me and Ben, my boyfriend.”

    Yeah Michael. BOYFRIEND.

    BACK THE FUCK UP.

    There is no amusement present here, Alyssa. None. I hold me breath every time I read a new chapter because I know the impending doom and gloom is coming.

    THAT BEING SAID, MORE SOON.

    AND Johnny/Gordonnnnn. =D
    October 26th, 2009 at 07:47pm
  • mully17

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    AWWW LOVE IT!
    October 26th, 2009 at 06:54pm
  • trigger;bang

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    love this, ben is so adorable.
    more soon?
    October 26th, 2009 at 06:31pm