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  • livjackson

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    loveee this!
    can't wait for another fantastic update!
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    October 26th, 2009 at 05:06pm
  • dyana.22

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    awwwwww. I can feel the love tonight.... :) haha
    October 26th, 2009 at 04:54pm
  • kare_bear

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    YES. MAKE BEN POUNCE AND BEAT THE SNOT OUT OF THAT GUY!
    I DO NOT LIKE HIMMMM. HE'S RUINING THE WHOLE FUTURE OF THE BEN BABIES.
    *sigh* please updateeeeeee.
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    <3
    October 26th, 2009 at 03:47pm
  • gasp;

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    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benny!!!! he is so cute! i totally understand the scowl thing. He always looks so pissed off at the world!!

    And Nikky and Pheebs.....................................................oh godddddddd!!!! i am already scared.
    But in reality pheebs would have already slept with him FYI!

    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    UPDATE LOVEEEEEEE!
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:08am
  • Ltsghwks

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    Ben + Evelyn + Hawaii = Hot!

    Also, I thought it was really cute that Ben was doing a background check on Hjalmarsson.
    October 21st, 2009 at 12:07am
  • Gillian.

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    Hey :D
    Just started reading your stories :D
    They are really good :) Your an awesome writer :L
    Update soon <3
    October 20th, 2009 at 08:55pm
  • rockstaar.

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    Aww, Benny's looking out for me (: Good thing Niky is basically perfect, so he need not worry.

    As for Evelyn and Ben, hooooott. Oh the things that happen in Hawaii. Loved the update, I'm pretty sure it should be updated soon?
    October 20th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • broken sticks

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    La la la sexy times in Hawaii. I wanna go to Hawaii. Somewhere nice and warm and pretty. I'm done with this cloudy/overcast/rainy times that we are already having here and it's not even winter yet! At least we haven't gotten snow yet. Anyways... Ben and Evelyn are adorable (as I usually say). I liked that Ben was protective of Phoebe. He clearly cares about his girlfriend's friends. Which is nice. It's cute that she's all butterflies with him still. =) Great update Lyss! More soon I hope?
    October 20th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Great job honey. Keep writing.
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:28pm
  • Jessica;

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    That's quite that Ben asked Cam about Nik.
    Such a good guy.
    And damn, hotness in Hawaii.
    More soon. <3
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:14pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    Awww, look at Ben being all protective of Phoebe! That's so sweet!

    And, I'm loving their whole Hawaii vacation even if most of the time is spent in the hotel room. Not that I can say much. I mean, she is with Ben Eager afterall =)

    Can't wait for more!
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:12pm
  • life.in.technicolor

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    Amazing, like always....
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:09pm
  • snowboarder79

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    Fabulous update dear <3 ! I really love this story : )
    And that ending was hot hot ! I can't wait for the next chapter...
    October 19th, 2009 at 08:30pm
  • sukiedancer21

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    Ah ha hes so white he'll turn into a lobster!!! I love it!!! Also just so you know a lot of people get married in hawaii ;) haha just kidding!! Cant wait for more!!
    October 19th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • nealerfan18

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    Love it.
    Love Ben and Evelyn's chemistry
    So freakin adorable together.
    October 19th, 2009 at 07:40pm
  • PensRock

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    I never get enough of your sexy times with Ben. Love it!
    October 19th, 2009 at 06:58pm
  • mully17

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    OMG ben is just a horny boy isn't he!! But wow I loved that chapter shows that the girl can what she wants lol !
    October 19th, 2009 at 06:55pm
  • dyana.22

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    <3 hawaii
    October 19th, 2009 at 06:33pm
  • lynne1988

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    She and Ben had done so much site-seeing, including seeing the Haleakala Crater and whale watching.

    THEY DID GO TO THE CRATER, LMFAO. YES.

    Lol, I like the "Pheebs" thing. Very cute. Also the way Ben was all protective of her! Awe.

    It wasn’t like he wore the scowl on purpose, he always tried to tell her, but Evelyn full heartedly disagreed. If he was even just a little stressed, the scowl was there. So, really, for the entire season, he looked angry all the time.

    I have the same problem. People always ask me "What's wrong?" Or "Why are you mad?" And I'm always like "Whuuut?" But yeah. Since I always look mad people who don't know me are like "Stay away from that bitch." And people who do know me know that when I AM actually mad, I look fucking livid.

    You'd know the look if you had pulled that sexting shit to my face. =)

    She turned her head to the side to look at Ben, only in a pair of red swimming trunks and lying on his stomach.

    You know why I giggled at this part? Because his red swim trunks are only going to make his sunburned skin look even more red. Lmfao.

    Did you add Cam Barker to spite me?

    HEH. DOGGY-STYLE. Lmfao. I am so immature. Like, REALLY immature. Like yesterday when we mentioned porn and then you asked what kind of meat was in my eggrolls and I got all perverted about it.

    (AND JUST SO OTHER PEOPLE READING MY COMMENT KNOW, I BROUGHT EGGROLLS TO HER HOUSE FOR THE FILIPINO MEAL I COOKED HER FAMILY. It wasn't a sexual thing to begin with. I] made it sexual. Heh)

    She wondered if the feeling would ever go away, but shook her head of the thoughts; she didn’t want it to. BOO FORESHADOWING. BOOOOOOOO.

    That thought alone, almost made him hard again. HEH. Again, with the pevertedness. I apologize to those offended by me.

    Except I'm not really sorry.

    Suck it.

    More soooooooon!! =)

    AND GORDON/JOHNNY & PATRICE
    October 19th, 2009 at 06:26pm
  • kare_bear

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    YES! update!
    LOVED IT!
    i want to go on a hawaiian vacation with Ben =[
    give me more of this right now.
    October 19th, 2009 at 05:26pm
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