The Art of Reckoning - Comments

love the story
can't wait to see what happen next

great update!!!!
i wanna know what he did to her though
update soon please
<3 Michele

Like you have no idea how happy I am to see more of this story...
you should know for sure that I'm gonna be addicted to it like all your other stories...
this chapter was just brilliant and GOD I loved that visit from Bobby HAHA he's just a darling, gotta give him a 'A' for effort... I mean the dude tries...
A vengeance sounds good... in more than one way ;) you know what I'm talking about HAHA

anyway, long story short... I love the story it's so awesome, keep it coming =D

What, exactly, did Zacky do that caused her to want revenge?

A friend of mine told me that you're one of the most awesome authors that she's ever read on this site, so I decided that I'd check you out. And hell, I'm so glad that I did. I didn't have time to read any of the multi-chaptered stories that you already have up, but this one was fantastic - one-shot or not, I freakin' loved it. And if there's more, I can't wait to see it.

"He was the bad boy of the group, but apparently he also had a heart of gold. Or so they say." Can I just say that this is the best line I've ever seen in referrence to describing Matt? It's just so spot on. Loved it. ;)

I don't know if you'll ever see this comment amongst the hundreds of others that you have, but here it is anyway. Hopefully I'll get around to reading more of your stuff soon.

PS. great to see another Aussie on the site. =)

Oh, I like it very much. It's a good plot you're working on here. Can't wait for a new chapter.
I believe that this story will be as exciting and interesting as others.

YAY! that's my little cheer for this story
it is an amazing start for a new story
but ouch when she turned him down at the end of the chapter
i also like how the roles are kinda switched
like Zack is the on who wants the relationship and she doesn't
i don't see many plot lines like this one
i am in love
<3 Michele

So here i am, ready to comment this aweomse story i've already read a draft for (for this chapter anyway) and though I am sad and crying cuz you neglected to tell me that you posted it, I'm ready to put all that aside and comment cuz it's been forever and a day since I've commented anything at all! hahaha

So I'm loving how she walks into the club, hearing a freakin' sweet Brand New song (one of my favorites by them FYI so kudos there) like she owns the place cuz guess what... SHE TOTALLY DOES!!! Not only that but she walks in with complete confidence, which is sexy as hell. I'm even attracted to her and she's a fictional character. hahahaha.

AHAHA. I like the sound of this Owen guy so far. He sounds like my kind of bartender. =]

And yay for 'Blue Monday'. Freaking awesome sexy song. This soundtrack just keeps getting better and better.

I love how she spots Jimmy out like she's been looking for him. =] That definitely suggests something, doesn't it?? ;] *nudge, nudge* hahaha. But I loved how you described all the guys. Seriously... and especially the way she's eyeing our precious little Zacky V. I'd be right there with her, absorbing in his beauty on that bar stool. hahaha. He's eye candy that no one can pass up unless they're BLIND! hahaha

YES! She downs the drink before getting another one! Thatta girl! =] and then MUSE!!!! OMG, how I love MUSE. I can imagine danicng to that song, haha, since I always do. Though I'm telling you, if you want a hella sexy song, 'Undisclosed Desires' is the one. Seriously... it's the best track (in my opinion) off the new album. hahaha. It gives me plenty of dirty ideas with just the lyrics alone... ;]

Ohh.... she's dancing to seduce Zacky.... I like it. And he totally bought it! Guys are so easy to sucker in. Just wiggle in front of them a bit and they're like putty in your hands. hahaha. But I do love this interaction going on with Lucy and Zacky.... you can feel the casual sexual tension between them. =] Just how I like it.

But these lyrics that are mentioned throughout the story... I feel like they're telling me a story within the story, you know? There's meaning to them somewhere. =] And I like that. It's a great use of the songs. hahah.

Ohh.... she's not only seducing him in the middle of the bar but she's feeling him up to! Lucy! I never thought you'd be so daring as to feel Zacky's crotch in public! haahha. But I like how he basically ditches his friends. hahaha. That's so like a guy who's about to get laid. They're willing to leave their buddies just to score some hot ass.... poor guys. hahaha.

And in the car! Man has no patience at all! hahahaha.

Ohh... hot sex! hahaha. They're both rather impatient, aren't they? ahahaha. But that's ok. I'm sure they're ok with being impatient. hahah. The quicker you are with discarding the clothing, the faster to you get to the fun stuff. ;]

"They laid there in comfortable silence for a while, his hand finding hers and bringing it up to rest on his chest where he laced their fingers together. She smiled and rolled closer to him, cupping his cheek in her free hand and pressing a soft and tender kiss to his lips before she rolled away and freed her hand from his.
“Where are you going?” he asked, watching as she slid out of the bed and stood beside it.
“Home,” she stated, searching the floor for her clothes."

AHAHA. It's like, "just when you were expecting them to admit they love each other or something predictable like that, BOOM!" She's ready to bounce and leave that fool all high and dry. ahaha I love that she's the one the leave him all bewildered, especially when he's admitting his feelings for her. AHAHA. it's actually kind of sad how he admits them to her.... i kind of feel bad for the guy, like I should give him a hug and tell him to 'Buck up Chuck'. ahahaha.

“Zack… I don’t do happily ever after’s,” she whispered, placing a soft kiss on his lips before she turned and walked away. "

OUCH! That was fucking cold!!! hahaha. She totally made out with him a bit and then said that to his face before taking off.... seriously, that was harsh but I loved it! I love it when girls are harsh.... besides, there's got to be some kind of meaning behind her ditching someone as beautiful and naked as Zacky like that. hahaha. =]

So yay! It's the start of the new story and I'm hella excited for it. I've been exicted for it since you sent me the draft to read all those months ago. ahahhaa. =] Hopefully there will be more soon!!! I can't wait to see how this one turns out, though I have a feeling that, just like all your other work, it will be amazing!!!!!!

=]

YAY!
MORE FROM DANNI!
i dont care how tired i am, i read this and LOVED IT!
damn you and your immense talent!
definantly looking forward to more
and more
and more!
XD

This is awesome.
Your writing is amazing.
This has Zacky.

Those are the reasons I'm subscribing. The first two being the most important. If it was shit I would not comment.

love this story line
can't wait for more

Wow... I love this already. The way you write is amazing. I'm really looking forward to reading more :- )

Another story I'll be hooked on!

Can't wait for the next update ^_^ I dont think I need to say more =P

Oh my goodness. How incredible was the start to this? TOO incredible. I'm already hooked on this story. Your writing is absolutely amazing and I wish I was half as good as you. This just sounds really good so far and I am at a loss for words. So I'll be looking forward to when you update this again and then I'll express my love for this story some more.

P.S. - Mmm.. I still love me some Zacky.. And D.C. of course. (;

loved this first chapter!
cant wait to see where you take it!

This is amazing so far.
I love it,update soon<33

Whoa. Once I was done reading this I had to read more so I’m excited that this is a multi-chapter one. Hmm, poor Zacky. He fell for her and she just wants the one-night stands? Will there be soap-opera drama in the chapters to come? I hope so. lol.

This is a crazy first chapter, I'm really glad you've decided to turn this into a chaptered fic as opposed to a one shot.
I can't wait to see what's going to go down :P
Update soon, and don't make me wait so long for this chapter!!

Awesome first chapter!
I can tell this story is going to be really interesting!
Update soon!!

this is amazing
i cant wait to read more