Two Weeks in Hawaii With My Chemical Romance - Comments

I really enjoyed this one shot.
It was very entertaining and well written.
You're a good writer :D

Lol, you one shot made me laugh. The only thing that saddened me was that it ended too soon! But great job.

Haha!! Your one-shot was really funny!! = D I loved Frank's statement right at the end. = D

~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

"Frank had tried touching Bob’s golden locks, Bob didn’t like that, and he used his awesome body builder moves on poor and innocent Frank."

Hahaha, that was fab, It made me laugh, too. You captured their personalities really well. Well done :D I'd have liked to hear a bit more about Hawaii though. :)

“You can’t even safely go in that swimming area, it’s five feet depth. You would drown.”

I live in Hawaii, and this is soo totally cool. I loved it, so detailed, which I like((: Thanks for the recomendation

That was pretty friggin sweet x]
You captured everyone's attitude. & I loved how you emphasized Franks Height. xD
Well done.
I loved it ^^

I love how you captured everyone's personality perfectly, especially Mikey's. My only problem however was that the end of the story seemed rather rushed and I would have liked to hear a few more details about their actual trip in Hawaii.
Thank you for entering the contest! :)