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  • mystical_flutterby

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    i absolutely loved both stories
    January 28th, 2008 at 07:07am
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    i absolutely loved both stories
    January 28th, 2008 at 07:07am
  • Lightning Zap

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    Thanks so much for reading all of this again. It's good that you still liked it!

    Haha, I forgot half the stuff that Bert says in this, I may have to go back and read it too = though it'll have to be after I've re-edited MSR, and that'll take some time.

    Lol, now I'm rambling :D
    January 15th, 2008 at 10:07pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    WoOoOoOoO! I finished it!!!!!!!!!!!!
    MSR and MSF in 4 f8cking days!!!!!!!!!!!
    Amazing ending, everything seems to be going well
    " "G-string, she's hot. She looks just like you, only with boobs!" " you had to put some random thing that Bert would say didn't you? I'm not complaining, it's funny stuff.
    I really liked re-reading this.
    Hope you liked my rambles.
    I finished reading this while listening to Sleep live at the concert I went to
    January 15th, 2008 at 09:14pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 41 - " "Hello city morgue, you kill 'em, we chill 'em", " that was an amazing thing to think of. I am on the floor laughing about it.
    Bertrude < also amazing thinking.
    January 15th, 2008 at 08:44pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 32 - " have driven Gerard out of my life again, just as I had when I had seen him kiss Eliza. It was my own fault that he broke up with me then and it's my own fault now. " < see Gerard you've made Frank think it's his fault when it's really not, if you'd told him when you found out this wouldn't have happened.

    *runs off still listening to Helena*
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:50pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 29 - " "So do you forgive me?", she asked.
    "Of course I do. I did a long time ago. But I still hate you.","
    *laughs head off*
    The new baby's name is uber cute!
    *runs off listening to Helena*
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:33pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    chapter 21 " I had begun to love her like a daughter. " Well sorry to tell you this Gerard but she is your daughter.

    " Maybe now that Tash wasn't going to be on MSN as much and I wouldn't see her as much, I wouldn't have to worry about telling Frank. " Gerard I swear ifI hadn't read this before I might do something not very nice to you for thinking that.

    *runs off listening to Mama once again*
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:18pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 19- " "I... uh.... Mikey and Alicia are having a baby.", he said. There was that face again. He looked like he mentally kicked himself again. " Gerard I swear if I din't know what happens I would hurt you
    ... but I wont cause violence isn't good and I know what happens and Gerard is amazing
    *runs back to story still listening to Mama*
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:13pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    " "Yeah. Mikey thought I was just getting fat.", " < Poor Alicia, not very clever Mikey.
    Gerard, you aboslute f*cker! Stop messing with everything that you had! GRR
    *runs back to story now listening to Mama*
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:09pm
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    Chatper 17- Gerard you are so f*cked up at the moment. Stop trying to make all of you not telling him something about something else and making Frank feel like he's done something wrong, he hasn't but you have for not telling him.
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:04pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    ^^^ Yay somebody loves my rambles!!!!!!!!!!! *does happy dance*
    Chapter 16- Grr Gerard you idiot, it's not Ray's fault you wont tell Frank.
    Ray is very right though.
    *runs off to read more while listening to WTTBP*
    January 15th, 2008 at 06:01pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    Lol, I'm loving your rambles so far :D
    January 14th, 2008 at 09:45pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 13 - "Bun-Gee" < best Gee inculded name yet! ( I never got that the first time I read this but I finally do!)
    Yay about Sarah and Jamia.
    Yay for Bert telling Gerard he has to tell Frank
    but :( to Gerard for not telling Frank
    January 14th, 2008 at 08:47pm
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    Chapter 7 - WOOO! TASH!!!!!!!!!!! Awesomeness!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 14th, 2008 at 08:30pm
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    Chapter 5- YAY! they're both alive but not the baby :( *cries*
    I'm starting to remember what happens, WoOoO!
    January 14th, 2008 at 08:25pm
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    Chapter 4 - I really didn't remember anything that happened to Mikey and Alicia and I'm really nervous for what will happen to them. :S
    I just got Deja Vu (sp?) then I dunno why but...
    anyway enough rambling just now. *runs back to story*
    January 14th, 2008 at 08:15pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    RAAR!
    I told you I would ramble at you today!
    I'm away to start reading.
    byebye *waves*
    January 14th, 2008 at 08:01pm
  • CATATONIC

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    : O

    NOO SHE LOST THE BABYYYY.

    Cry
    November 14th, 2007 at 01:38pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    Awww thanks so much.
    November 7th, 2007 at 05:03am