Girl I Know - Comments

I like it. I hate michelle love M. I feel so srry for her.

love more soon

wowee!! this story should have like a bazillion stars! cant wait for the next update =D

i dont know what to say... Brian has to see the truth and M must do something

loved the update
does brian not even notice what he does?
more soon?

please continue this story. It's great

Om I feel bad for M.
Especially with Michelle : (
Please update !!
Soo subscribing btw
xoxo

:) - i really enjoy this story, and you write well, that's a definite plus.

This was definitely worth the wait. Your updates always make me laugh. It doesn't matter what about, but it makes me laugh.
Just in this story, I very much hate Michelle. She without a doubt knows how Mercury feels, and she just keeps rubbing it in like the bitch she is. Gah, I want to punch her.
And then I felt bad that she ran into Brian and started to cry.
“Mercury why do you always cry when you see me? What is going on? You always tell me.” He is really a dumb ass, isn't he? I mean, honestly, he should understand what's going on. It's kinda obvious.
Yay for Zacky being the amazingly adorable older brother and making her feel better. I laughed so hard when they were playfully insulting each other and Jimmy yelled owned from the other side of the door. It was hilarious.
I love Jimmy's actions the most in this story. He's always so damn funny. But the part that made me laugh the most is when Brian and Mercury hugged Matt to death when he came in. :P
But man, I felt bad for Mercury when Brian said that part at the end. I mean, he has to know now what's bothering her. Either that, or he is officially a complete dumb ass. xD
Update again soon! :D <3

AAWWW!
poor M. that sucks =( i feel so bad for her, god i loved the a7x girlfriends in real life but when it comes to the stories and their bitches, i kinda love trash talking them...soo fuck you michelle!
of course i never mean those things lol
love the story, im a new reader, so please update soon.

-ACE

i love it so far can't wait for updates

you are really going hard on M...

that sounds like something o would have done when i was 12. lol
loved how you did both of their point of views
can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Oh lordy. Poor M. :( Gah, I just feel so bad for her. I loved getting Brian's point of view in this chapter. It really made me less mad at him, and I could see where he was coming from. I definitely did not want Michelle to be at the door, but of course she was there. She ruins everything. ;)
I can't believe he said, "I love you M." We all knew who he was thinking about. :P Still kinda in shock about that one.
Poor Mercury and her dream! That's so terrible. I can't even imagine waking up to hear someone you love doing it with someone that you really hate. I bet Michelle is rubbing it in her face on purpose too.
Amazing update! Do so again soon! :)

This is such an amazing story. :P
but of course Michelle had to come to see her Bri Bri . Fuck her, I called Brian that first. my favourite line of all time. I laughed so hard. Michelle is such a bitch in this story, and I don't much care for her, although I'm sure she's super nice in real life. xD
At first the chapter was fun and playful, but then michelle had to come in and ruin it. I felt so bad when M started crying. I was like "noooooo!!!" :( It made me pretty upset. and then brian the jackass doesn't see what he's doing to her. Gah, poor gal. I want to give her a massive hug right now.
Update again soon! :D <3

poor M :(
i feel so bad for her. :(

i love this for two reasons!
one: it's awesome!
two:michlle is getting shat upon, lol
*subscribed* after the first chapter, too!

YAY!!! UPDATE!!!

i wonder if brian feels the same now?
more soon?

great update
loved the carnival
can't wait for more