gahaha! This chapter made me laugh the entire time I was reading it! It was so random and hilarious that I couldn't help myself. I think I noted a little sexual tension between the two at the start. ;) Yay for Ren and Stimpy. lmao. And then the circus. Woah boy. Avenged at the circus is like a fat kid on cake. It is great! Poor Johnny the little circus midget. :P The yoyo and the cotton candy booth girl getting shut down made me laugh so hard. I was really disappointed when this ended. :P lol. Update again really soon please! :D
Their relationship makes me laugh all the time. xD This was an amazing update. I really liked how you described how she felt just being near him. Update again soon. :)
Oh god. This whole chapter I was seriously just laughing. Your story is sooo great! :D The teacher being a retired porn star, Brian smirking as he waited for Mercury to get done school, her new friends, all that was just amazing. It was FANTASTICAL!! bahaha! Update soon! You've got me interested with that last line. ;)