Hmm, in response to mademoiselle, I sure as hell don't pity Maggie. I get the feeling that she's just trying to have Eli for herself because she's not getting what she wants. I think she's jealous that Grace has someone as great as him and she can't bear it, so she's trying to ruin it. Just a hunch, though. I could be wrong.
Anyway, this is great, as always. I was so excited when I saw that you updated. Can't wait for the next one!
well...even though everyone else may pity maggie, I sure as hell want to kill her and her stupid baby. I'm sorry but I don't think I'll continue reading, grace is so naive it makes me want to slap her...I'm not sure why though, I hardly concentrated reading the latest chapter. Don't get me wrong, your story was amazing until the part where maggie get's pregnant and sure it was a massive twist in the story, but I'm not fond of teenage pregnancy...I'm not saying that you should change the plot, but a girl can express her opinions right?
Just because Maggie's relationship didn't work out doesn't give her the right to take it out on Grace. Grace was just trying to be a good friend. I hope Maggie realizes that and finds a guy who will love her. Pregnant or not.
I knew Elijah wouldn't do that to Grace! I feel bad for maggie, but she shouldn't be selfish and take it out on grace. (This story seems so real. Like the charcters and all) I really like this story...please update soon!
Holy shit. I have to be honest - this is probably the best work I've read in a really long ass time. I've been writing for like, nine years? It even makes me ashamed of my stuff. And that doesn't happen that often. You have a really good style. It's very real - almost straightforward, and I really really love that about this. Elijah is probably the most adorable thing I've ever had the pleasure of imagining (lol ;P), and I think I want to marry him. And Grace is just perfect. I really feel that your characters are real people.
You better update this soon, or I will find you. Just kidding. But seriously. -_-
I really hate Maggie though,I can't believe she did that!!!