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  • debzxxx

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    phew! i thought they were gonna have it and i was like NOoooOo! lol :P
    great update :D
    December 29th, 2009 at 01:46pm
  • mademoiselle

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    yay, loved the update!
    December 29th, 2009 at 12:47pm
  • iHeartDinosaurs

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    Hey I LOVE your story!! It's so cute!! Or... something. I hope you update soon, cause that's a major cliffhanger right there! I mean woah, he asked for IT!! So... yeah. I like how it's turning out so far, but I have a few questions:
    1. Didn't Maggie or something want Eli? What happened and shouldn't there be like some kind of drama of some sort between Maggie and Grace?
    2. Did Eli ever tell her that he took pictures of Grace?
    3. Did he ever tell her he supposedly stalked her for a few monthes?
    4. What's up with Grace's parents? Are they bad parents or something?
    5. What about Eli's dad, is he a bad parent, too?
    That's all for the questions', but I gurantee there will be more in the future. Oh, and a quick observation, I forgot where the mistake was, but when you have a proper name that ends with "s" you're not supposed to add "s" with a apostrophe like regular names you're only supposed to add the apostrophe. I know this, because my name ends with an "s", so it's Alanis' instead of Alanis's.
    Sorry if you think I'm harsh or plain stupid. =D
    December 29th, 2009 at 07:04am
  • mademoiselle

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    yay, update! loved it as usual, and I can't believe Eli asked her to have 'sex' with him :L anyways can't wait for more!
    December 24th, 2009 at 07:31am
  • debzxxx

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    uh-ohh. lol
    ur backk! :P
    love this story!x
    December 24th, 2009 at 05:21am
  • eeeee

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    =3

    Want to know what I think? 'Nawwwwwwwwwwww =3'

    =D Update soon!
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:17am
  • loverfayce.

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    I finally read through all of this, and I've gotta it's very very very cute. It makes me smile. (:

    One thing that I find a bit hard to read is Grace's point of view. It a bit detached, and the emphasis seems to be put on the wrong things. It's kind of confusing.

    Otherwise, I really love this. Looking foreword to more. :D
    November 12th, 2009 at 06:23am
  • xiluvmusicx

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    I love that chapter! Go rain!
    November 7th, 2009 at 04:30am
  • mademoiselle

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    one of the best chapters! omg thats was so adorable!
    i loved the rain scene, they're just so...whats the word? romantic i guess
    -love eli and grace, cant wait for the next update!
    November 7th, 2009 at 12:21am
  • debzxxx

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    i liked that chapter =D
    it was so cute! haha
    November 6th, 2009 at 11:08pm
  • L___

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    soo cute! :) <3
    November 6th, 2009 at 03:56pm
  • eeeee

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    I like it switching, one Eli....one Grace. and so on.

    =]

    I dunno whatever you decide I'm sure will be great! =]

    Update soon!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 11:35am
  • xiluvmusicx

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    I kind of like to hear both takes on what's going on.
    November 2nd, 2009 at 02:31am
  • mademoiselle

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    ngaw dude i was like this :( this morning and after i read this chapter im like :D!
    i love i love, grace and eli are a match made in heaven. btw I agree with dotyky about the whole perspectives thing.
    cant wait for more! xx
    November 2nd, 2009 at 12:20am
  • dotyky

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    Lovely update, and I completely agree with what you've said about the perspectives- Grace actually seems somwhat more superficial with the way she describes herself whereas from the beginning, I thought Eli was really going to go in for her! The contrast between these two protagonists is really nice, and for this chapter, the ending was so perfect that it made me smile! She's a typical girl, even if she does adore the library, hey? I wait for more! :)
    November 1st, 2009 at 07:26pm
  • debzxxx

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    This is amazing :)
    uPDATE SOON! :D
    November 1st, 2009 at 12:07pm
  • lucy4eva

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    second comment by me :]
    AWHHHHHHHHHHH SO SWEET
    I LOVE THE CONFESSING WAY.
    like. the way they confess. yeah. xP
    i would really rate this 10. if i actually knew how to rate >.<
    blahh. helppp. how do people rate, anyone tell me? x3
    October 31st, 2009 at 05:32am
  • xiluvmusicx

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    It was Adoreable!
    October 31st, 2009 at 04:24am
  • not mohawks; robots

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    ah, way to go eli.
    October 30th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • Gillian.

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    Loved the update :D
    I don't think the chapter was too soon, sometimes love catches you off guard :D
    Can't wait for the rest of this story :) It's going to be awesome <3
    October 30th, 2009 at 06:26pm