Snake Bite Heart With a Bubble Gum Smile - Comments

I don't know how many different times I cried while reading this. All through out the story I couldn't stop reading to find out what is going to happen next. Thanks for the actually original (fan-fic) story.

I'm off to read Alex's continuation story now. <3

:D

I was so sad when I read that it was over,
But there's a sequel-ish, so that makes everything better.

Your writing is so amazing. :D I love it.

Me : Noooooo! >.< ITS OVER?!?
You : But wait! There's a sequel!
Me : *looks* OooOoOOOooooOooO!!!! YAY!!!

i really enjoyed this story :)

oh man. a sequal too? you are to good to us all . ;D

+i love yer ending, i kind of never get on the computer that much, which is strange for i have no life ;D

Couldn't have ended better ;)
Jack is an amazingggggg person "kinky ghost sex" and all ;D

I'll be sequel waiterrr<3

That is sweet.

AH MAZINGG!
well I need to go
gotta read teh sequal!

I loved the storyy<3 ahaa write as fast as you cann ! (:

Oh wow... That was an amazing story, you have talent :)
I love how different this is to anything else I've read and I can't wait for the new story :)
keep up the great work
=D

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AMG! Jackkk is adorable! I'm so glad he decided to wait (:
and i love his witty (albeit sexual) comments, i'd expect nothing less from him.
x]
Sorta stoked for the sequel, but also sorta not, because i'm not sure what to expect and its making me anxious..:/

*round of aplause! with excited giggling and umping around!* lol whis was amaing!!!!!!!! ur positivly brilliant!

P.s dont forget about the contest

Haha, this was GREAT!
So sad to see it's finished...
But I like the end :D
So I'm happy !

Aww, it's all over!

But, I can't wait for your next story! Let me know when you post it please!

OH. MY. GASKARTH.
The ending literally KILLED me x3
It was so cute, I can't even...
Oh Jack, how he goes from "you're worth waiting for" to "kinky ghost sex" stuns me sometimes x]
Please comment me when you post the sequel?
I'm pretty stoked <3

Please comment me to let me know when the sequel comes out. Can't wait for it.

I loved this story!
Can't wait till the sequel!

WHAAAAAAAA YAY
that was amazing <3
hehe I GOT FIRST?
maybe
I dunno
I loved it <3

BIGEST AWE CHAPTER EVER!!
looveeeeeeeeeeeedd this story!
Alex is the cutest brother ever.
And Jack, Ohh jack x].
Ill come back and finish this comment after, my laptop is about to die and i'm going out.
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