Snake Bite Heart With a Bubble Gum Smile - Comments

awwww, alex was so sweet, (and protective.)

oh man, lyric. im so sorry i haven't gotten to read any of this for a long time !
i love your story, and i love all your updates. you're a great writer.
continue on , and i promise i won't miss another update .
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awwh!
amazingly cute (:
hope you had a very merry christmas... or hannukah or something....

So unbelievably cute! Thanks for updating again...I can't wait for the next chapter.

Awwwh! Such a cute brother sister moment :)
Merry Christmas Eve!
Or whatever holidy you celebrate! ^.^

Let's allsay it together, AWWWW

Oh Alex Gaskarth, why must you be so cute? x3
He's such an awesome bro :P

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That was so cute, and Alex saying all of that was really nice of him<3
It brought tears to my eyes too! And I'm not even August! :*)

Thanks for this. Nice little Pre-Christmas gift.
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Aww, that is so sweet.

AWWWW!!! that was sooo sweet!!! i love this story!

great story! im addicted :)
cant wait for the next one!

Whenever you update , my day is made . :]
Merry Christmas ! :D

awww,
yay for them >///<

aw. alex is so sweet.
I loved this chapter, alot.

I cried..
Lame, I know.. :/
I LOL'd aswell, but it was such a sweet chapter..
God i wish my brothers were like alex.. -_-
Fave chapter so far??.. well maybe not, but its up there..
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he better wait for her, she is so worth it :)

"You think I'm sexy. It's okay. I understand. I think I'm sexy too."

That made me lol. It's a totally Jack thing to say.

and I think August is worth waiting for. :D Jack just might get impatient, lol.

And you need to update soon. ;D

I'm sorry, but I thought before I give you a real comment, that this story deserved 3 extra comments and a new subscriber x)

I just got through reading ALL of your updates... You're a really good writer, yanno that? :T
You also have a unique writing style, I haven't seen it in a while, so that's good:)

I really like Jack stories, so this is no exception x)
I lovelovelove this♥<333

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